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On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. You have travel insurance to cover the cost anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of the insurance company. In the letter you should: • describe the item that you lost • explain how you lost it v.2

On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. You have travel insurance to cover the cost anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of the insurance company. In the letter you should: • describe the item that you lost • explain how you lost it v. 2
Reading is an essential skill to enhance an intellectual level of the mankind. Adolescents, who habituate with reading in the childhood; reveal the remarkable performance in their academic work. Along with reading skills, there are many skills such as a team spirit and the communication skill that play a vital role to achieve their educational goals. To begin with, the most crucial skill called the reading skill empowers the pupils to study effectively and efficiently. If they have not cultivated the reading skill in their elementary study; the higher studies become more difficult for them. For instance, the survey conducted by the times of India in 2005 revealed that the ratio of college dropout students had raised exorbitantly due to lack of the reading skill. Moreover, the fascinating habit of reading at teenage act as a boon for the young generation, where they can utilise all the resources to acquire the knowledge to build their prosperous career. Such a practice will boost up the development of an individual as well as the society. Furthermore, apart from the reading skill, there are two factors that influence the academic activity of a child; the communication skill and the team spirit. The communication skill is more essential for the students to cope this competitive world. To represent, their knowledge in a meaningful way they must pursue the communication skills. Lastly, the team spirit skill, allows the pupils to be more productive in group work. For instance, the children working together in a team have focussed on their team goal instead of their individual goals. These two factors impose great effect in academic activity of a child. In conclusion, to cultivate the younger generations with good skills is a prime responsibility of the society. If they learn these skills in their early life, it lasts for the whole life and make the responsible and productive citizens. The regime should also encourage this practice.
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is an essential
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skill
to enhance an intellectual level of the mankind. Adolescents, who habituate with
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reading
in the childhood; reveal the remarkable performance in their academic work. Along with
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reading
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skills
, there are
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many
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skills
such as a
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team
spirit and the
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communication
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skill
that play a vital role to achieve their educational goals.

To
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begin
with, the most crucial
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skill
called the
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reading
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skill
empowers the pupils to study
effectively
and
efficiently
. If they have not cultivated the
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reading
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skill
in their elementary study; the higher studies become more difficult for them.
For instance
, the survey conducted by
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the times of India
in 2005 revealed that the ratio of college dropout students had raised
exorbitantly
due to lack of the
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reading
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skill
.
Moreover
, the fascinating habit of
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reading
at teenage act as a boon for the young generation, where they can
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all the resources to acquire the knowledge to build their prosperous career. Such a practice will boost up the development of an individual
as well
as the society.

Furthermore
, apart from the
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reading
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skill
, there are two factors that influence the academic activity of a child; the
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communication
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skill
and the
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team
spirit. The
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communication
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skill
is more essential for the students to cope this competitive world. To represent, their knowledge
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in a meaningful way
they
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must
pursue the
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communication
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skills
.
Lastly
, the
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team
spirit
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skill
,
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allows
the pupils to be more productive in group work.
For instance
, the children working together in a
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team
have focussed on their
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team
goal
instead
of their individual goals. These two factors impose great effect in academic activity of a child.

In conclusion
, to cultivate the younger generations with
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good
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skills
is a prime responsibility of the society. If they learn these
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skills
in their early life, it lasts for the whole life and
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make
the responsible and productive citizens. The regime should
also
encourage this practice.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes
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IELTS essay On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. You have travel insurance to cover the cost anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of the insurance company. In the letter you should: • describe the item that you lost • explain how you lost it v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
319 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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