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Your class has had a discussion about television. Write a composition entitled 'watching television is a waste of people's time. Describe how much time people spend watching TV and say whether watching TV is a good or bad thing.

Your class has had a discussion about television. Write a composition entitled 'watching television is a waste of people's time. Describe how much time people spend watching TV and say whether watching TV is a good or bad thing. go57

In my personal opinion watching TV could be a time waster activity because you can do more useful things in these hours. However, if you are watching a documentary film or a science lecture, you could learn a lot and it is not harmful. By the way, I love movies and cinema so it is difficult for me, to stop the time-waster and unuseful but entertaining activities, too. Although, one of my favourite hobbie is the film-making and video editing so this makes it even harder not to create and watch moving pictures.

In my personal opinion watching TV could be a time waster activity This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 you can do more useful things in these hours. However
, if you are watching a documentary film or a science lecture, you could learn a lot and it is not harmful. By the way, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 movies and cinema This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 it is difficult for me, to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasediscontinue
stop
 the time-waster and unuseful This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 entertaining activities, too. Although, one of my Possible spelling mistake. 'favourite' is British English.favorite
favourite
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hobbie
 is the film-making and video editing This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 this This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
 it even harder not to create and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
watch
 moving pictures. 