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Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time this can benefit teenagers and community as well to what extand do you agree or disagree

Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time this can benefit teenagers and community as well to what extand JDoB
In new era civilization, jobs are becoming popular among students in the world It is argued that teenagers demand to work without getting salary in their leisure time while others believe that these decignhnes could play important role for community and teenagers. From my point of view, teenagers need to do unpaid community to get valuable experiense and contribute to society To begin with, youngesters should do work for free time to get some information and to achive results which they are planning in the future
In new era civilization, jobs are becoming popular among students in the world It
is argued
that
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teenagers
demand to work without getting salary in their leisure time while others believe that these
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decignhnes
could play
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important
role for community and
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teenagers
. From my point of view,
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teenagers
need to do unpaid community to
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get
valuable
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experiense
and contribute to society To
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begin
with,
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youngesters
should do work for free time to
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get
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some
information and to
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achive
results which they are planning in the
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future

IELTS essay Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time this can benefit teenagers and community as well to what extand

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