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Youngsters want to live with their parents . Do you agree or disagree.

Youngsters want to live with their parents. EdqLB

These days, youngones would like to stay with their guardians after completing the graduation and seek out for the jobs. While, there are number of advantages, but few disadvantages which I will discuss in upcoming paragraphs. Taking into account certain factors, it is justified to believe that why young people need to live outside from home, is beneficial for number of reasons. First, if adults do not go outside for education and finding job, they will remain deprived to be self dependent.

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 outside from home, is beneficial for number of reasons. First
, if adults do not go outside for education and finding job, they will remain deprived to be self dependent. 