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Describe a person who you think is very open

Describe a person who you think is very open 0laEB
To be honest I saw many persons who think very open they don't hide and thoughts from others people here I would like to talk about my favourite person her name is Renu Bala she is also my zoology teacher so I know about her very much because I spend my 2 years with her and now my third year going with her in addition to this she think is really very open and b and not feel any and comfort was in front of her we can share every feeling every thought without any hesitation because she is behaviour is really are so friendly and I remember believe when I was a lot of problem in geology subject then she also help me on that stays and another reason is that when all my classmates and including me face a problem in the furniture of class that time we have to write application and also give the application in front of the principal mam so that time renewal has also support us and are so stand for us in front of the principal so after that we can say that she is really open thinking she don't afraid and upper positions principles or is one higher authorities so I really felt good about my Renu wala teacher and I really want to become myself same like Renu colours mam.
To be honest I
saw
many
persons who
think
very
open they don't
hide
and thoughts from others
people
here I would like to talk about my
favourite
person her name is
Renu
Bala
she is
also
my zoology teacher
so
I know about her
very
much
because
I spend my 2 years with her and
now
my third year going with her
in addition
to this she
think
is
really
very
open and b and not feel any and comfort was in front of her we can share every feeling every
thought
without any hesitation
because
she is
behaviour
is
really
are
so
friendly and I remember believe when I was
a lot of problem
in geology subject then she
also
help
me on that stays and another reason is that when all my classmates and including me face a problem in the furniture of
class
that time we
have to
write application and
also
give the application in front of the principal mam
so
that time renewal has
also
support us and are
so
stand
for us in front of the principal
so
after that we can say that she is
really
open thinking she
don't
afraid and upper positions principles or is one higher authorities
so
I
really
felt
good
about my
Renu
wala
teacher and I
really
want to become myself same like
Renu
colours
mam.
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IELTS essay Describe a person who you think is very open

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
230 words
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