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time when you were faced with problems or stress

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Prevously i worked as a software engineer at one of leading global company. So every day we get the new task and tough dead lines but the problem is with about the team. Because while we are working with the team, we have to depend on other members task completion. Due to that our task will delay and getting stretch. That was a really hard to manage by myself. So then i always tried to improve the communication with dependant colleuge and share the update with him, if he stuck on his work, i also helped him to complete his task and when i was lagging on some tasks other team members also helped. Once after we completed all the task we had a tea or coffee together while sharing lot of jokes. So that method helped me to release stres
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completion. Due to that our
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we had a tea or coffee together while sharing lot of jokes.
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IELTS essay time when you were faced with problems or stress

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
140 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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