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young people have little leisure time and under a lot of pressure.what do think are causes and what solution can you suggest

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It is an evident phenomenon currently, young people a lack of comfortable feeling in the life and alwys put under a lot of pressure. This essay will provide some coauses and solutions. The first reason to explain this trend is student must spend almost time studing instead of relaxed. Their time covered by schedules such as extra lesson, private lesson, so on and even they have not time to entertain activities on the society. As a result, students fell ionto states of depreeion and not want to communicate with society. For example, parents have tend encourage their child take time to learn and ban they join community activities and that bring to youngster pressure and lost square time. Another justification as there are many exam are held aims to test qualification of student must hard study and no free time. Moreover, school and parents always posed high targets ad press student do that so, student gradually stuck by strickly request a lot. For example, universities only accept student who have high grades. Therefore, they will try to do something that enables them ti gain their goal like study a lot. Finally, the best way to solve this isues is awareness of parents. They should stop press their overload study and enables their child have leisure time. Parents need to give good advice to promote student learn a positive way. Beside, universities should give score suitable for student to they have a variety of choices. All in all, reasons that cause drawback influences for youngster’s life on the society.
It is an evident phenomenon
currently
, young
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people
a lack of comfortable feeling in the life and
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alwys
put under
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a lot of
pressure. This essay will provide
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some
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coauses
and solutions.

The
first
reason to
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explain
this trend is
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student
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must
spend almost
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time
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studing
instead
of relaxed. Their
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time
covered by schedules such as extra lesson, private lesson,
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so
on and even they have not
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time
to entertain activities on the society.
As a result
,
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students
fell
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ionto
states of
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depreeion
and not want to communicate with society.
For example
,
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parents
have
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tend
encourage their child take
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time
to learn and ban they
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join
community activities and that bring to youngster pressure and lost square
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time
. Another justification as there are
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many exam
are held
aims to
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test
qualification of
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student
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must
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hard
study and no free
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time
.
Moreover
, school and
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parents
always posed high
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targets
ad press
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student
do that
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so
,
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student
gradually
stuck by
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strickly
request a lot.
For example
, universities
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only
accept
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student
who have high grades.
Therefore
, they will try to do something that enables them ti gain their goal like study a lot.

Finally
, the best way to solve this
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isues
is awareness of
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parents
. They should
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stop
press their overload study and enables their child have leisure
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time
.
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Parents
need to give
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good
advice to promote
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student
learn a
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positive
way. Beside, universities should give score suitable for
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student
to they have a variety of choices.

All in all, reasons that cause drawback influences for youngster’s life on the society.
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IELTS essay young people have little leisure time and under a lot of pressure. what do think are causes and what solution can you suggest

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
258 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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