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most country areas of the US ,a lockdown is set all over the world in which adults are not allowing to be outside of the country after a particular time at night time they are more accompanied by an teenagers.

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most country areas of the US, a lockdown is set all over the world in which adults are not allowing to be outside of the country after a particular time at night time they are more accompanied by an teenagers. Here i will discuss the advantages and disadvantages in upcoming paragraphs. To begin with, there are many merits with this statement. Firstly, young generation is the choose the job for the outside. Because adults need more the money. Because of this, young generation do the study in the college. The teenagers are gain more knowledge to different course. Secondly, the teenagers fulfill the basic needs to themselves. The children lot time spend on the family. The teenagers can higher study of the other country. Thirdly, the children can meet the other people. For instance, the adults can more information in different culture and tradition. on the other hand, there are many demerits. The teenagers are many facing the problems in the other country. Sometimes the young generation are not comfortable at the home the children can not achieve the goal. The teenagers are more tension and stress the education and fees. Beside the night more accidents chance of the other side. the authority should provide the laws at the night time. The government should close the all companies to the night time. The authority should strict fine the all the higher companies. In conclusion, although it is serious problem of the all over the country at the night time children more work in the company.
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areas of the US, a lockdown
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all over the world in which adults are not allowing to be
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will discuss the advantages and disadvantages in upcoming paragraphs.

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are gain more knowledge to
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fulfill the basic needs to themselves. The
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lot
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spend on the family. The
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can higher study of the
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culture and tradition.

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hand, there are
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demerits. The
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facing the problems in the
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.
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the young generation are not comfortable at the home the
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can not achieve the goal. The
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are more tension and
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the education and fees. Beside the
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more accidents chance of the
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side.
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the
authority should provide the laws at the
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night
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time
. The
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government
should close the all
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companies
to the
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night
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. The authority should strict fine the all the higher
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companies
.

In conclusion
, although it
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problem of the all over the
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at the
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children
more work in the
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company
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IELTS essay most country areas of the US, a lockdown is set all over the world in which adults are not allowing to be outside of the country after a particular time at night time they are more accompanied by an teenagers.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
255 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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