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Young people have attitude and ideas different from that of their parents and grandparents. How do these attitudes differ between young people and their parents and grandparents? In your opinion, do you think it would cause problems?

Young people have attitude and ideas different from that of their parents and grandparents. How do these attitudes differ between young people and their parents and grandparents? In your opinion, do you think it would cause problems? ElWa3
With the advent of modernisation era, it revolutionised the human existence. No doubt, it is a mess benefits but along with this, it also generate a generation gap between old and young people. Today's young generation has disparity in thinking and dear from the former generation which I can portray in the subsequent paragraphs. As far as my views are concerned, the pre-dominant reason is technology which is prevailing all over the world and create a craze in the young generation. The youngsters are technofeddy they preferred to use technological equipment in every aspect of life such as wiping out the house they use vacuum cleaners etcetera but in the passive time, people done this with their hand. Besides this, they are technofoby because they did not use this type of things in their former life and they are not habitual with these electrical equipment. Moreover, in the fast pace of life, it is not easy to earn the bread and butter, in the competitive era, people have hectic all days schedules which contains diligence. After a tireless day, it is not possible to cook the food due to this reason they prefer to eat fast food instead of consuming traditional food. Last but not least, there are a lot of differences between the dressing sense, because of the modernisation era, youngsters adopt the western culture and they prefer to Veer best addresses such as jeans, skirts but old people prefer to wear their own additional clothes such as salwar suits for girls as according to Punjabi tradition. According to me, because of the disparity among older and young cause of plethora of problems, firstly, how the families are became nuclear family is people prefer to live separate from their parents when they get married, because the Thoughts can create disbutes and a lot of conflicts between them which cannot be carried easily. Do you to these reason they prefer to live in nuclear family is over the joint families, so they will disturb in their private life. Further more, because of the nuclear families, there is no one in their house who can look after their children and give them moral values due to this reason their children became manner less and they are deprived from the love of their grandparents. In conclusion, everyone has their own views, I do not deny any of them but I cogitate that because of technology and modernisation, it creates a gap between parents and child which is grave concern today. People need to say the gravity of the problem and address before it gets to late.
With the advent of
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modernisation
era, it
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revolutionised
the human existence. No doubt, it is a mess benefits
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but
along with this, it
also
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generate
a generation gap between
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old
and
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young
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people
.
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Today
's
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young
generation has disparity in thinking and dear from the former generation which I can portray in the subsequent paragraphs.

As far as my views
are concerned
, the
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pre-dominant
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reason
is technology which is prevailing all over the world and create a craze in the
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young
generation. The youngsters are
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technofeddy
they preferred to
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use
technological equipment in every aspect of
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life
such as wiping out the
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house
they
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use
vacuum cleaners etcetera
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but
in the passive time,
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people
done this with their hand.
Besides
this, they are
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technofoby
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because
they did not
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use
this type of things in their former
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life and
they are not habitual with these electrical equipment.
Moreover
, in the
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fast
pace of
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life
, it is not easy to earn the bread and butter, in the competitive era,
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people
have hectic all days schedules which contains diligence. After a tireless day, it is not possible to cook the food due to this
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reason
they
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prefer
to eat
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fast
food
instead
of consuming traditional food. Last
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but
not least, there are
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a lot of
differences between the dressing sense,
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because
of the
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modernisation
era, youngsters adopt the western
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culture and
they
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prefer
to Veer best addresses such as jeans, skirts
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but
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old
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people
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prefer
to wear their
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own
additional clothes such as salwar suits for girls as according to Punjabi tradition.

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According to me
,
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because
of the disparity among older and
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young
cause of plethora of problems,
firstly
, how the
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families
are
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became
nuclear
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family
is
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people
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prefer
to
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live
separate from their parents when they
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get
married,
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because
the Thoughts can create
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disbutes
and
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a lot of
conflicts between them which cannot
be carried
easily
. Do you to these
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reason
they
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prefer
to
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live
in nuclear
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family
is over the joint
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families
,
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so
they will disturb in their private
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life
.
Further
more,
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because
of the nuclear
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families
, there is no one in their
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house
who can look after their children and give them moral values due to this
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reason
their children became manner
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less and
they are
The usual collocation for "deprived" is "of" not "". Did you mean "deprived of"?
deprived from
the
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love
of their grandparents.

In conclusion
, everyone has their
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own
views, I do not deny any of them
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but
I cogitate that
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because
of technology and
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modernisation
, it creates a gap between parents and child which is grave concern
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today
.
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People
need to say the gravity of the problem and address
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before
it
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gets
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to
late.
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IELTS essay Young people have attitude and ideas different from that of their parents and grandparents. How do these attitudes differ between young people and their parents and grandparents? In your opinion, do you think it would cause problems?

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