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Some people say that modern technology has made life too complicated and the solution is for everyone to live a simpler life and avoid using the technology. Do you agree or disagree? Give examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people say that modern technology has made life too complicated and the solution is for everyone to live a simpler life and avoid using the technology. Give examples from your own knowledge or experience. wnjbm
Some individuals believe that modern technology leads to more life complications and the answer to this problem is to stay away from it and live a simpler life. I am of a contrasting opinion with this statement and I stand that these technologies actually do the opposite. To start with, technology was created to make lives easier. Seeking goods and services is just a click away with the use of cellular phones or computers. For instance, ordering products can be done at the convenience of people’s homes using state of the art applications such as Amazon, Uber or Grab. This can even be more economical since people can choose the cheapest among all the offered items. Because of this, people would be able to save time, effort and money. In addition, modern advancements have helped people experience faster transactions. With the computerisation and digitisation of certain data, faster processing of requests and services can be expected. As a case in point, government processes dealing with extraction of data can be easily done since manual search will no longer be depended upon. Requesting for documents will no longer take months since searching will be done electronically instead. Furthermore, not utilizing available technology can affect everybody, community and even the country. Every delays in any business dealings can be tantamount to losses. Businesses can be affected by the slower delivery of goods can affect which can result in the financial problems of a city and ultimately, in the long run affect the country’s economy as well. To sum it up, although modern technology can seem to complicate the lives of people, it is clear that it still offers more advantages and is indeed helpful in individuals, communities and countries. Therefore my beliefs remain that technology is a tool to make our lives less complicated.
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Some
individuals believe that modern
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technology
leads to more life complications and the answer to this problem is to stay away from it and
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live
a simpler life. I am of a contrasting opinion with this statement and I stand that these
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technologies
actually do the opposite.

To
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start
with,
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technology
was created
to
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make
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lives
easier. Seeking
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goods
and services is
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just
a click away with the
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use
of cellular phones or computers.
For instance
, ordering products can
be done
at the convenience of
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people’s
homes using
Did you mean "state-of-the-art"?
state of the art
applications such as Amazon, Uber or Grab. This can even be more economical since
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people
can choose the cheapest among all the offered items.
Because of this
,
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people
would be able to save time, effort and money.

In addition
, modern advancements have
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helped
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people
experience faster transactions. With the
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computerisation
and
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digitisation
of certain data, faster processing of requests and services can be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
expected
. As a case in point,
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government
processes dealing with extraction of data can be
easily
done since manual search will no longer
be depended
upon. Requesting for documents will no longer take months since searching will
be done
electronically
instead
.

Furthermore
, not utilizing available
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
technology
can affect everybody, community and even the country. Every
The noun should be probably in the singular form: "delay"?
delays
in any business dealings can be tantamount to losses. Businesses can be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
affected
by the slower delivery of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
goods
can affect which can result in the financial problems of a city and
ultimately
, in the long run affect the country’s economy
as well
.

To sum it up, although modern
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
technology
can seem to complicate the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
lives
of
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people
, it is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
clear
that it
still
offers more advantages and is
indeed
helpful in individuals, communities and countries.
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Therefore
my beliefs remain that
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technology
is a tool to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
lives
less complicated.
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IELTS essay Some people say that modern technology has made life too complicated and the solution is for everyone to live a simpler life and avoid using the technology. Give examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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  American English
5 paragraphs
302 words
6.0
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