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The Life Is “Day and Night”

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The Life Is “Day and Night” By: ‘Abhey Saini’ Come and go “day” and “night”! Mortals utter Come “happiness” and go “sadness”! The day is peace whereas nighttime is blues in accordance to the total of the humans! We all be aware of as to alongside with day, the night time is additionally important! The truth of lifestyles is the tendency of “day and night”! Both are currently in the race of rats! Both are necessary for the race of life! Along with ease, mortals need to love sadness! AS the nervousness makes the human sturdy to tolerate all the scenario of life!
The Life Is “Day and Night”

By: ‘
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Abhey
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Saini
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This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Come
and go “day” and “night”!

Mortals utter
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Come
“happiness” and go “sadness”!

The day is peace whereas nighttime is blues in accordance to the total of the humans!

We all be aware of as to alongside with day, the
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night time
is
additionally
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important
!

The truth of lifestyles is the tendency of “day and night”!

Both are
currently
in the race of rats!

Both are necessary for the race of life!

Along with
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ease
, mortals need to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
sadness!

AS the nervousness
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makes
the human sturdy to tolerate all the scenario of life!
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IELTS essay The Life Is “Day and Night”

Essay
  American English
10 paragraphs
103 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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