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Young people can take and solve anything, thrive themselves if they get proper training and advice from the elder

Young people can take and solve anything, thrive themselves if they get proper training and advice from the elder Xy35q
Most contemporary, the issue includes several young people comparatively number of older people, While a common opinion is that including young, energetic people help a large portion of overall development. And others feel that including young people is just enganing number and fact of increasing population. In this essay, I will attempt the key factors why people may prefer, and here I will share my opinion on advantages outweigh the disadvantages. Generally speaking, In modern societies. There is a wide range of reasons why people believe that they are going through highly competitive circumstances. For instance, young people can take on any challenges. It is because the young population are well trained, optimize with new technologies, has adopting skill. On the other hand, humans are used to diminishing their talent when they are getting older. They need to take a permanent break, which can consider an impact on overall development if measuring the proportion of the population, active or idle. Afterward, s A further point is in favor of humans are upgrading themselves. Alternatively, they are getting weaker, and a certain time later, they depend on others. Unless man can not survive, they remain the rest of his life when they cannot do anything. It means older people are eventually dependent on young people for living purposes—certainly, a generation tech to later generations. Learn to serve. Despite these arguments, there is a case for the idea that to maintain population and make them skilled is a very complicated and uphill matter. Consequently, without proper education, distinct personality and responsibility sense helps a man to make an appropriate human for the society and country. But, if it is not possible, both and young and the older generation could be the waste. Another primary purpose is older people how many days they live they hold the position. They have the potentiality to do there job. Whether they get proper guidelines and suitable opportunities isn't a practical solution to increase young people, rest the older people. Although, young people can hold the development a long time. They can learn easily compared to older people. So it's better to give older people suitable work to advise young people with their experiences, then the younger people can take the hardest and challenging positions. In a nutshell, this topic is very relevant to mdern society and very complicated. Having considered the opinions, I would argue that, Young people can take and solve anything, thrive themselves if they get proper training and advice from the elder. So, increasing the young population is a prudent decision compared to older people.
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comparatively
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, While a common opinion is that including
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, energetic
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help
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feel that including
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number and fact of increasing
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. In this essay, I will attempt the key factors why
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people
may prefer, and here I will share my opinion on advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

Generally
speaking, In modern societies. There is a wide range of reasons why
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people
believe that they are going through
highly
competitive circumstances.
For instance
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young
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can take on any challenges. It is
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are
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well trained
, optimize with new technologies, has adopting
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skill
.
On the other hand
, humans are
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used
to diminishing their talent when they are getting
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older
. They need to take a permanent break, which can consider an impact on
overall
development if measuring the proportion of the
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population
, active or idle. Afterward, s A
further
point is in favor of humans are upgrading themselves.
Alternatively
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man
can not survive, they remain the rest of his life when they cannot do anything. It means
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older
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people
are
eventually
dependent on
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for living purposes—
certainly
, a generation tech to later generations. Learn to serve.

Despite these arguments, there is a case for the
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that to maintain
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and
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them skilled is a
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complicated and uphill matter.
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helps
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and the
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generation could be the waste. Another primary purpose is
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how
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days they
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they hold the position. They have the potentiality to do
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job. Whether they
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proper guidelines and suitable opportunities isn't a practical solution to increase
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, rest the
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can hold the development a long time. They can learn
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suitable work to advise
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with their experiences, then the younger
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can take the hardest and challenging positions.

In a nutshell, this topic is
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relevant to
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mdern
society and
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complicated. Having considered the opinions, I would argue that,
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can take and solve anything, thrive themselves if they
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get
proper training and advice from the elder.
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So
, increasing the
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young
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is a prudent decision compared to
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.
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IELTS essay Young people can take and solve anything, thrive themselves if they get proper training and advice from the elder

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
432 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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