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A small study in Rome showed that more than half of 129 children per not had at least one symptom of more than 120 days. The Us has recorded more than 5. 7 million children with covid-19, according to the national institute of agriculture. The number of children admitted to record highs in recent months, but cases of serious symptoms are rare. It is not clear how many American children have covid- 19, but doctors say many of the people have headaches, fatigue, muscle pains, hard to concentrate on for months, making life more difficult. When the new academic year began, those challenges became clear.

A small study in Rome showed that more than half of 129 children per not had at least one symptom of more than 120 days. The Us has recorded more than 5. 7 million children with covid-19, according to the national institute of agriculture. The number of children admitted to record highs in recent months, but cases of serious symptoms are rare. It is not clear how many American children have covid- 19, but doctors say many of the people have headaches, fatigue, muscle pains, hard to concentrate on for months, making life more difficult. When the new academic year began, those challenges became clear. NwnN2
A small study in Rome showed that more than half of 129 children per not had at least one symptom of more than 120 days. The Us has recorded more than 5. 7 million children with covid-19, according to the national institute of agriculture. The number of children admitted to record highs in recent months, but cases of serious symptoms are rare. It is not clear how many American children have covid- 19, but doctors say many of the people have headaches, fatigue, muscle pains, hard to concentrate on for months, making life more difficult. When the new academic year began, those challenges became clear.
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IELTS essay A small study in Rome showed that more than half of 129 children per not had at least one symptom of more than 120 days. The Us has recorded more than 5. 7 million children with covid-19, according to the national institute of agriculture. The number of children admitted to record highs in recent months, but cases of serious symptoms are rare. It is not clear how many American children have covid- 19, but doctors say many of the people have headaches, fatigue, muscle pains, hard to concentrate on for months, making life more difficult. When the new academic year began, those challenges became clear.

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