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You went to a new cafe last weekend and you want to go there again with your friend jenna

You went to a new cafe last weekend and you want to go there again with your friend jenna KwpON
My dear friend Jenna. How are you? I am fine thanks. So, I am going to tell you about my last weekend that I had a great time with my classmates. Primarily, we wanted to visit some special restaurants. Then we decided to go the New Pizza cafe which has recently opened in the middle of city centre. It was quite wide, huge, colourful and decorated with wonderful labels. We were really well served by waiters as they were extremely friendly, respectful and immediately get on well with everyone. The dishes were so marvellous. Jenna, I am planning to go there again and this time It would be best if you hang out with me. Let's go there next saturday. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Best wishes!
My dear friend Jenna. How are you? I am fine thanks.
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, I am going to
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tell
you about my last weekend that I had a great time with my classmates.
Primarily
, we wanted to visit
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some
special restaurants. Then we decided to go the New Pizza
'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"
cafe
which has recently opened in the middle of city
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centre
. It was quite wide, huge,
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colourful
and decorated with wonderful labels. We were
really
well served by waiters as they were
extremely
friendly, respectful and immediately
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get
on well with everyone. The dishes were
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so
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marvellous
. Jenna, I am planning to go there again and this time It would be best if you hang out with me.
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Let
's go there
next
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saturday
. I am looking forward to hearing from you
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soon
. Best wishes!
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IELTS essay You went to a new cafe last weekend and you want to go there again with your friend jenna

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
131 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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