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I saw the advert for a talent show and decided to apply

I saw the advert for a talent show and decided to apply 6xDG8

It was in the middle afternoon and I was walking around near my home. When i approached in front of notice board I saw the advert which was about"improve our skills". There was written: if your school does not have its own magazine, founding one can be an excellent opportunity to show off your leadership skills. It is true that starting a school magazine is also the best way to get other students involved with journalism and creative writing, and also to generate school's pride. Beginning a magazine from scratch can be a tough occupation, but the end results can be worth your while if you stick to it. Consult with an adviser, preferably one who is also an English and journalism teacher, for advice and support.

It was in the middle Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).afternoon, and
afternoon and
 I was walking around near my home. “When” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
When
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 approached in front of notice board I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 the advert which was aboutUse a smart closing quote here: "”".”
"
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 our This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
Use a smart closing quote here: "”".”
"
. There was written
: if your school does not have its This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 magazine, founding one can be an excellent opportunity to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 off your leadership This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
. It is true that starting a school magazine is also
 the best way to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 other students involved with journalism and creative writing, and also
 to generate school's pride. Beginning a magazine from scratch can be a tough occupation, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 results can be worth your while if you stick to it. Consult with an adviser, preferably
 one who is also
 an English and journalism teacher, for advice and support. 