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You travelled by plane last week and your suitcase was lost . You have still leard nothing from the airline company. Write to the airlines and explain what happened Describe your suitcase and tell them what was in it. Find out what they are going to do about it. You should write at least 150 words.

You travelled by plane last week and your suitcase was lost. You have still leard nothing from the airline company. Write to the airlines and explain what happened Describe your suitcase and tell them what was in it. Find out what they are going to do about it. 0715
Having a factory in the community has both its pros and corns. Even though there are some benefits of having a factory, I wouldn't support the idea of having it in my community and the reasons will be elaborated further in the passage. First of all, factories should be established in the Industrial zones and not resiential areas. Without doubt factories produce pollution and noise which tend to effect peacefullness and health of its neighboring residents. Secondly, factories demands workforce beyond existing population of the community and cause in-flocks of people. Finally, residents have to share their services and local infrastructures with factory operation and additional people. This may causes failure of the existing system and push communtity to gentrification. On the contrary, factories bring job opportunities and increase economic activities in the community while contributing positively in GDP of the country. Some people argue that pollution caused by factories are regulated by government to make it non-harmful to health and well being of people as well as environment. Additionally, industries can be made responsible to invest in the local infrastructures and services to develop the community. In conclusion, factories can be a bane or boon to the society depending on many different factors discussed earlier. Yet, the instances of factories destroying community are far more prominent than factories uplifting them hence I have an opposing view when it comes to the establishment of a factory in my community.
Having a
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factory
in the
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community
has both its pros and corns.
Even though


there are
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some
benefits of having a
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factory
, I wouldn't support the
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idea
of
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having


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it
in my
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community
and the reasons will
be elaborated
further
in the passage.

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First of all
,
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factories
should
be established
in the Industrial zones and not
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resiential


areas. Without doubt
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factories
produce pollution and noise which tend to effect

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peacefullness
and health of its neighboring residents.
Secondly
,
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factories
demands workforce

beyond existing population of the
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community
and cause in-flocks of
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people
.

Finally
, residents
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have to
share their services and local infrastructures with

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factory
operation and additional
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people
. This may causes failure of the
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existing


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system
and push
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communtity
to gentrification.

On the contrary
,
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factories
bring job opportunities and increase economic activities

in the
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community
while contributing
positively
in GDP of the country.
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Some
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people


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argue
that pollution caused by
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factories
are regulated
by
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government


to
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make
it non-harmful to health and
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well being
of
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people
as well
as environment.

Additionally
, industries can
be made
responsible to invest in the local

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infrastructures
and services to develop the community.

In conclusion
,
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factories
can be a bane or boon to the society depending on
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many


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different
factors discussed earlier.
Yet
, the instances of
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factories
destroying

community are far more prominent than
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factories
uplifting them
hence
I have an

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opposing
view when it
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comes
to the establishment of a
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factory
in my
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community
.
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IELTS essay You travelled by plane last week and your suitcase was lost. You have still leard nothing from the airline company. Write to the airlines and explain what happened Describe your suitcase and tell them what was in it. Find out what they are going to do about it.

Essay
  American English
14 paragraphs
239 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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