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You talk about my friend and memory with my friend

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A few days ago, she went to the hospital for a check-up, intending to be hospitalized for treatment. But that day, her house had an anniversary, so she had to go back to get things and help her grandmother. Recently she told me that she always feels tired. Until yesterday, I found that her social media account is locked and I can't be contacted. It only took a few minutes for me to find out that she was hospitalized because of poisoning
A few days ago, she went to the hospital for a
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check
-up, intending to
be hospitalized
for treatment.
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But
that day, her
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house
had an anniversary,
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so
she had to go back to
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get
things and
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help
her grandmother. Recently she
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
told
me that she always feels tired. Until yesterday, I found that her social media account
is locked
and I can't
be contacted
. It
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only
took a few minutes for me to find out that she
was hospitalized
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because
of
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poisoning

IELTS essay You talk about my friend and memory with my friend

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
81 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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