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You talk about my friend and memory with my friend

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A few days ago, she went to the hospital for a check-up, intending to be hospitalized for treatment. But that day, her house had an anniversary, so she had to go back to get things and help her grandmother. Recently she told me that she always feels tired. Until yesterday, I found that her social media account is locked and I can't be contacted. It only took a few minutes for me to find out that she was hospitalized because of poisoning

A few days ago, she went to the hospital for a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
-up, intending to be hospitalized
 for treatment. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 that day, her This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 had an anniversary, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 she had to go back to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 things and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 her grandmother. Recently she This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :informed
told
 me that she always feels tired. Until yesterday, I found that her social media account is locked
 and I can't be contacted
. It This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 took a few minutes for me to find out that she was hospitalized
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphpoisoning.poisoning!poisoning?poisoning:poisoning,poisoning;
poisoning