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the type of accommodation that you prefer to live in.

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I think I prefer my house where I have been living with my family for the past 20 years. My humble house is located in a small and quiet street, but it is also close to a hospital and some schools. So it is fairly convenient and pleasant for me to spend my childhood there. Just beside my house stands a big old tree. I usually open the window to enjoy the wind and sunshine, which will help cool down the house without an air conditioner. My family consists of four people, and each of us has our own room, I think our house is big enough for us but still a warm and cozy place that I call home. Since the impact of covid 19, I spend most of my time staying at home so it means the whole world to me. So yeah, I would always miss my house whenever I’m away.
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tree. I
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without an air conditioner. My family consists of four
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, and each of us has our
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room, I
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a warm and cozy place that I call home. Since the impact of
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covid 19
, I spend most of my time staying at home
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it means the whole world to me.
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yeah, I would always miss my
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whenever I’m away.

IELTS essay the type of accommodation that you prefer to live in.

Essay
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1 paragraphs
154 words
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