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The Best Way to Solve the World’s Environmental Problems Is to Increase the Cost of Fuel

The Best Way to Solve the World’s Environmental Problems Is to Increase the Cost of Fuel N3k7y
It has been recommended that out of many solutions, the best solution is to hike the prices of petrol and diesel to ameliorate environmental hazards. I thoroughly agree with the statement because fewer vehicles will run on the road and demand for other means of transport will rise such as cycles or e-rickshaws. First off, escalating the prices of fuel will make the masses use their types of machinery less. Resultantly, there will be less pollution. To elaborate it, the paradigm shift makes people use their individual vehicles, and the emission of toxic gases from these vehicles deteriorate the air quality, and the environment gets polluted. This contaminated ambience is not suitable for dwellers of any city or town. Therefore, if the prices increase, people will not run their vehicles. They will not enhance their financial burden, such as the money they have saved for eating outside, paying for gym facilities, and throwing parties. They will need to cut their expenses to refuel their cars or any vehicle. So, it is good to raise the prices of conventional fuel.
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agree
with the statement
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fewer
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will run on the road and demand for other means of transport will rise such as cycles or e-rickshaws.

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off, escalating the
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prices
of fuel will
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make
the masses
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use
their types of machinery less.
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, there will be less pollution. To elaborate it, the paradigm shift
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makes
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people
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use
their individual
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vehicles
, and the emission of toxic gases from these
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vehicles
deteriorate the air quality, and the environment
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gets
polluted. This contaminated ambience is not suitable for dwellers of any city or town.
Therefore
, if the
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prices
increase,
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people
will not run their
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vehicles
. They will not enhance their financial burden, such as the money they have saved for eating outside, paying for gym facilities, and throwing parties. They will need to
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cut
their expenses to refuel their cars or any
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vehicle
.
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So
, it is
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good
to raise the
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of conventional fuel.
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IELTS essay The Best Way to Solve the World’s Environmental Problems Is to Increase the Cost of Fuel

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
179 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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