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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are part of a group of musicians who meet on Tuesday and Friday evenings to practise in the community hall. You have been told, however, that it is no longer possible for the group to use the hall. Write v.3

You are part of a group of musicians who meet on Tuesday and Friday evenings to practise in the community hall. You have been told, however, that it is no longer possible for the group to use the hall. Write v. 3
In recent years, there has been an upsurge in vehicular movement globally. While it is argued by some that the security and safety of lives and properties lies in reduction of speed limits, others have a contrasting view. In my opinion, a reduction in speed limits of vehicular movement will have a great impact. On the one hand, it has been said that the safety of people lies in the reduction of speed limit and I agree. Nowadays, motorists are driving and racing with so much tenacity without taking others into consideration. However, this is more evident among teenagers of school age because they still exude in them a high level of youthful exuberance. For instance, in my teenage years, i lost a friend who chose to race with another friend of his despite being drunk. Looking at the positives of minimum speed limit, i will say a drastic action needs to be taken at limiting motorists' speed. On the other hand, some are of the school of thought that motorists who drives too fast should be heavily taxed. I disagree with this viewpoint because some are financially buoyant and as a result, they will continue putting lives at risk. For example, Justin Bieber has been known to make news headlines mainly as a result of his reckless driving. Nevertheless, I believe there should be a better punishment such as serving a jail term. In conclusion, this essay has opined to the thought that a reduction in speed limit should be carried out on cars as against all other opinions. This is of utmost importance especially when factoring lives of other commuters
In recent years, there has been an upsurge in vehicular movement globally. While it
is argued
by
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some
that the security and safety of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
lives
and properties lies in
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reduction
of
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speed
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
limits
, others have a contrasting view. In my opinion, a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
reduction
in
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speed
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limits
of vehicular movement will have a great impact.

On the one hand, it has
been said
that the safety of
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people
lies in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
reduction
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
speed
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limit
and I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
. Nowadays, motorists are driving and racing with
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so
much tenacity without taking others into consideration.
However
, this is more evident among
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
teenagers
of school age
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because
they
still
exude in them a high level of youthful exuberance.
For instance
, in my teenage years,
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
lost a friend who chose to race with another friend of his despite
being drunk
. Looking at the positives of minimum
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
speed
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
limit
,
Did you mean "I"?
i
will say a drastic action needs to
be taken
at limiting motorists' speed.

On the
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other
hand,
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some
are of the school of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
thought
that motorists who drives too
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fast
should be
heavily
taxed. I disagree with this viewpoint
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because
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some
are
financially
buoyant and
as a result
, they will continue putting
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
lives
at
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
risk
.
For example
, Justin Bieber has
been known
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
news headlines
mainly
as a result
of his reckless driving.
Nevertheless
, I believe there should be a better punishment such as serving a jail term.

In conclusion
, this essay has opined to the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
thought
that a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
reduction
in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
speed
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
limit
should
be carried
out on cars as against all
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
opinions. This is of utmost importance
especially
when factoring
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
lives
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
commuters
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes
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IELTS essay You are part of a group of musicians who meet on Tuesday and Friday evenings to practise in the community hall. You have been told, however, that it is no longer possible for the group to use the hall. Write v. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
271 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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