Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

You saw this advertisement in a local newspaper, and have decided to apply for a job.

You saw this advertisement in a local newspaper, and have decided to apply for a job. 3xq5l
You saw this advertsement in a local newspaper, and have decided to apply for young helper for 12-14 year olds. Dear Ben CarollI am writing to apply for a position of a young helper job which was advertised in this week's edition of local newspsper for 12-14 years olds. I am a 24 years old English teacher. l have BA degree awarded by Nukus State Pedagogical Institute named after Ajiniyaz in 2012. I passed the examination for the second then first category certificate in English in sequence. Morever I was awarded to the prize which us called " The best teacher in Karakalpakstan" in 2019 for my pupils who become second and third place in Educational Olympic competition. I have been working for secondary school number 15 in Chimney as English teacher since 2012. During this time I have enjoyed teaching English with interactive methods including games, activities. l have more experience which you demanded in your advertisement. Also I an on holiday. My own job is perfect. However I have extra money. I consider myself to be experienced. I have organizational skills and IIt makes me relaxed to work with children. I would be grateful if you would pay attention to my application. I am available to work any time from 5 th-25 th July. I look forward th hearing from you. Yours sincerelyAlfiya Kudaibergenova.
You
saw
this
advertsement
in a local newspaper, and have decided to apply for young helper for 12-14 year olds. Dear Ben
CarollI
am
writing to apply for a position of a young helper job which
was advertised
in this week's edition of local
newspsper
for 12-14 years olds. I am a 24 years
old
English teacher.
l
have BA degree awarded by
Nukus
State Pedagogical Institute named after
Ajiniyaz
in 2012. I passed the examination for the second then
first
category certificate in English in sequence.
Morever
I
was awarded
to the prize which us called
"
The best teacher in
Karakalpakstan
"
in 2019 for my pupils who become second and third place in Educational Olympic competition. I have been working for secondary school number 15 in Chimney as English teacher since 2012. During this time I have enjoyed teaching English with interactive methods including games, activities.
l
have more experience which you demanded in your advertisement.
Also
I
an
on holiday. My
own
job is perfect.
However
I have extra money. I consider myself to
be experienced
. I have organizational
skills
and
IIt
makes
me relaxed to work with children.
I
would be grateful if you would pay attention to my application.
I
am available to work any time from 5 th-25
th
July.
I
look forward
th
hearing from you. Yours
sincerelyAlfiya
Kudaibergenova
.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay You saw this advertisement in a local newspaper, and have decided to apply for a job.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
226 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts