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A number of governments provide public facilities to people free or at low cost .do adanvtages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

A number of governments provide public facilities to people free or at low cost. do adanvtages of this outweigh the disadvantages? lWY8K
In this day and age, authority give public facilities to people at free or lost cost such as medical care and education. I think the merits of this trend outweigh the demerits, and the facts of the thesis are going to be elaborated in further pargarphs. There is no denying that by giving free health care facilities to everyone would effect the quality of doctors and nurses, and lack of medical equipment. In government hospital, for example, there is no proper facility of some dieases and even doctors are not available at time of emergency but it is not always true for all areas. However, the benefit is that all and sundry get treatment regardless of wealth. It is widely acknowledged that many people are reluctant to visit doctors because of high expenses of doctors, medicines and treatment, especially underprivileged people. When regimes should provide them health treatment for free or at low price, it would make them able to get facilities under thier budget. As a result, the overall health of people will improve and it will have a positive impact on economy of country as it is cited that a healthy nation need healthy people. Moreover, giving free education have some repercussion as it would lower the value of education. When education provide at free of cost, people do not take it seriously. It is not applicable to all though this is true for only those who belong to high class or not interested in study. However, the advantages is that this approach can educate more people. It cannot be denied that if regimes should give education for free of cost or at chapter rate, more and more people grab the opportunity and has benefited them enormously. Consequently, the literacy rate may improve, and by getting education people strengthen thier career prospects. For example, many British countries have get impressive results in literacy rate by giving free education to general public. In conclusion, although giving free public services have some negative impact, I believe its benefits outweigh the drawbacks as it give everyone access to health care facilities and improve the literacy rate.
In this day and age, authority give public facilities to
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or lost cost such as medical care and
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education
. I
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the merits of this trend outweigh the demerits, and the facts of the thesis are going to
be elaborated
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further
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pargarphs
.

There is no denying that by
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giving
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free
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health
care facilities to everyone would
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effect
the quality of
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doctors
and nurses, and lack of medical equipment. In
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government
hospital,
for example
, there is no proper facility of
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some
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dieases
and even
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doctors
are not available at time of emergency
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but
it is not always true for all areas.
However
, the benefit is that all and sundry
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get
treatment regardless of wealth. It is
widely
acknowledged that
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many
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people
are reluctant to visit
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doctors
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because
of high expenses of
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doctors
, medicines and treatment,
especially
underprivileged
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people
. When regimes should provide them
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health
treatment for
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free
or at low price, it would
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make
them able to
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get
facilities under
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thier
budget.
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, the
overall
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health
of
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people
will
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improve
and it will have a
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positive
impact on economy of country as it
is cited
that a healthy nation need healthy
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people
.

Moreover
,
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giving
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free
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education
have
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some
repercussion as it would lower the value of
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education
. When
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education
provide at
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free
of cost,
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people
do not take it
seriously
. It is not applicable to
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all though
this is true for
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only
those who belong to high
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class
or not interested in study.
However
, the advantages is that this approach can educate more
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people
. It cannot
be denied
that if regimes should give
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education
for
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free
of cost or at chapter
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rate
, more and more
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people
grab the opportunity and has benefited them
enormously
.
Consequently
, the literacy
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rate
may
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improve
, and by getting
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education
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people
strengthen
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thier
career prospects.
For example
,
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many
British countries have
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get
impressive results in literacy
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rate
by
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giving
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free
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education
to
Consider using "public".
general public
.

In conclusion
, although
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giving
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free
public services have
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some
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negative
impact, I believe its benefits outweigh the drawbacks as it give everyone
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access
to
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health
care facilities and
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improve
the literacy
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rate
.
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IELTS essay A number of governments provide public facilities to people free or at low cost. do adanvtages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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