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You must answer the question, Sam is an art student and has written to you with a request. Write an email and the notes you have made.

You must answer the question, Sam is an art student and has written to you with a request. Write an email and the notes you have made. DN0nj
I have been so glad to receive a letter with so specific appeal from you. Besides that, I felicitate on starting the course. In such a way, we will pick up a convenient space for drawing together. But still, it would be a wonderful background in my wide garden, which has been working for 5 years. Moreover, I am designing on the points that were to be planned varied Flowers on it. For me, I would prefer to be drawn to a place where engaged in yoga exercises. I have always wanted to open yoga train courses. It would stay wonderful memories from you, I Think. Write me, if you are content with my offer.
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glad to receive a letter with
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specific appeal from you.
Besides
that, I felicitate on starting the course. In such a way, we will pick up a convenient space for drawing together.
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still
, it would be a wonderful background in my wide garden, which has been working for 5 years.
Moreover
, I am designing on the points that were to
be planned
varied Flowers on it. For me, I would prefer to
be drawn
to a place where engaged in yoga exercises. I have always wanted to open yoga train courses. It would stay wonderful memories from you, I
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IELTS essay You must answer the question, Sam is an art student and has written to you with a request. Write an email and the notes you have made.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
115 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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