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You have recently studied in another country but had to leave the course in between and return back to your country. Write a letter to the course administrator-Thank him/her for assisting you with enrolling into this course. Explain him/her why you had to l v.1

You have recently studied in another country but had to leave the course in between and return back to your country. Write a letter to the course administrator-Thank him/her for assisting you with enrolling into this course. Explain him/her why you had to l v. 1
These days, self-driven cars are being used for travelling. It is occurring due to the advancement of technology, it should be seen as a positive development because it reduces the traffic accident. People rely on machines due to the development of artificial intelligence in machines. It is because we all are connected with big data through internet, and we are totally dependent on this technology in today’s world. For example, when the teacher gives an assignment, students go to the internet and find relevant data about that topic and complete their assignment. Artificial intelligence in cars should be seen as a positive development by all of us. It is because, self-driven vehicle reduces the stress of driving, people get a distress while stuck in traffic and it sometime result in the road accident, so artificial intelligence also reduces the chances of accidents on the road because it incorporates sensor system that catch and aware the driver that there is a threat so that the car driver can hold the vehicle before accidents happen. For instance, recent report concluded that, 95% of road accident happens due to the error of human, due to the fact that humans can make mistakes anywhere anytime due to the distraction of mind. In conclusion, although there are some negative points as well in artificial intelligence in the car, but the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of self-driven car, thus, we all should support this development of technology. word bang stumble crumble fiasco catastrophe stained strained incredulous
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cars
are being
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used
for travelling. It is occurring
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due
to the advancement of technology, it should be
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seen
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positive
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development
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because
it
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reduces
the traffic accident.

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rely on machines
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due
to the
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development
of artificial
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intelligence
in machines. It is
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because
we all
are connected
with
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big
data through internet, and we are
totally
dependent on this technology in
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today
’s world.
For example
, when the teacher gives an assignment, students go to the internet and find relevant data about that topic and complete their assignment.

Artificial
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intelligence
in
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cars
should be
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seen
as a
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positive
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development
by all of us. It is
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because
, self-driven vehicle
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reduces
the
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stress
of driving,
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people
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get
a distress while stuck in traffic and it sometime
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in the road
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accident
,
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so
artificial
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intelligence
also
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reduces
the chances of
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accidents
on the road
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because
it incorporates sensor system that catch and aware the driver that there is a threat
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so
that the
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car
driver can hold the vehicle
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before
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accidents
happen.
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, recent report concluded that, 95% of road
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happens
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due
to the error of human,
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due
to the fact that humans can
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make
mistakes anywhere anytime
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due
to the distraction of mind.

In conclusion
, although there are
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some
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negative
points
as well
in artificial
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intelligence
in the
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car
,
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but
the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of self-driven
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car
,
thus
, we all should support this
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development
of technology.
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IELTS essay You have recently studied in another country but had to leave the course in between and return back to your country. Write a letter to the course administrator-Thank him/her for assisting you with enrolling into this course. Explain him/her why you had to l v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
249 words
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7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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