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You have lost your student identification card This has created some problems for you Write a letter to the director of student services In your letter advise them of your situation explain how this is affecting you request a new card v.1

You have lost your student identification card This has created some problems for you Write a letter to the director of student services In your letter advise them of your situation explain how this is affecting you request a new card v. 1
Children, at a startling journey of their adulthood, consume legal & illegal substances to have their mood swing. Some sociologist’s blame that guardian’s & other members of society mostly hold a bad example. This essay will discuss the causes, effects and solutions to overcome this situation. One of the causes because of which teenagers fall in the trap of drugs is family background. Kids are more prone to learn something by copying exactly what an elderly person does. To illustrate this, that is why children follow anyone from the family who is addicted to drugs. A survey done by the Guardian newspaper claims that 60% of cases of drug abuse by children is because of their house members. In addition to this, some adolescents face loneliness or relationship issues, and consequently, they prefer choosing the path of consuming drugs by fair and unfair means. The excess drug abuse would result in harmful consequences. To explain this, they will be struggling with day-to-day tasks because they are being not able to concentrate. This will definitely hit their studies and in some cases decision making. In most cases, if they didn’t get any drugs, they will try to achieve it by unfair means and finally, they will end up in crime. According to Police statement analysis by crime branch investigation department in 2019, approximately 74. 5% of the cases were done by alcoholic or drug abuser. To reduce the impact of serious consequences of drug abuse, there are many ways to hamper it; one of the ways is good ties between parents and children. That means parents should spend time on activities with their children with which they enjoy much & don’t feel alone. As a result, they will be very satisfied with the relationship and they will not try to find other ways of happiness by unjust means. To summarize, drug abuse is a serious concern our community is facing. It has several causes, many effects and to reduce to the drug abuse when it goes beyond the limit, there are only limited proven solutions. In my opinion, to prevent the use of drugs, the parent should keep eyes on their kids and they must nurture them with moral culture, healthy lifestyle.
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Children
, at a startling journey of their adulthood, consume legal & illegal substances to have their mood swing.
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Some
sociologist’s blame that guardian’s & other members of society
mostly
hold a
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bad
example. This essay will discuss the causes, effects and solutions to overcome this situation.

One of the causes
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because
of which
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teenagers
fall in the trap of
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drugs
is family background. Kids are more prone to learn something by copying exactly what an elderly person does. To illustrate this,
that is
why
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children
follow anyone from the family who
is addicted
to
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drugs
. A survey done by the Guardian newspaper claims that 60% of cases of
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drug
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abuse
by
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children
is
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because
of their
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house
members.
In addition
to this,
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some
adolescents face loneliness or relationship issues, and
consequently
, they prefer choosing the path of consuming
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drugs
by
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fair
and unfair means.

The excess
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drug
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abuse
would result in harmful consequences. To
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explain
this, they will be struggling with day-to-day tasks
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because
they are being not able to concentrate. This will definitely hit their studies and in
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some
cases
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decision making
.
In most cases
, if they didn’t
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get
any
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drugs
, they will try to achieve it by unfair means and
finally
, they will
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end
up in crime. According to Police statement analysis by crime branch investigation department in 2019, approximately 74. 5% of the cases
were done
by alcoholic or
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drug
abuser.

To
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reduce
the impact of serious consequences of
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drug
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abuse
, there are
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many
ways to hamper it; one of the ways is
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good
ties between parents and
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children
. That means parents should spend time on activities with their
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children
with which they enjoy much & don’t feel alone.
As a result
, they will be
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very
satisfied with the
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relationship and
they will not try to find other ways of happiness by unjust means.

To summarize
,
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drug
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abuse
is a serious concern our community is facing. It has several causes,
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many
effects and to
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reduce
to the
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drug
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abuse
when it goes beyond the limit, there are
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only
limited proven solutions. In my opinion, to
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prevent
the
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use
of
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drugs
, the parent should
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keep
eyes on their
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kids and
they
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must
nurture them with moral culture, healthy lifestyle.
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IELTS essay You have lost your student identification card This has created some problems for you Write a letter to the director of student services In your letter advise them of your situation explain how this is affecting you request a new card v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
371 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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