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You have long been friends with someone. If they do something that you don’t like, should you still be friends with them?(The Explanation type, generally one side of the issue is discussed)

You have long been friends with someone. If they do something that you don’t like, should you still be friends with them? (The Explanation type, generally one side of the issue is discussed) 7apn3
From down of civilization up to nowadays, human beings' communication have been increasing, from a basic and primary relationship as first type to friendship as an important and optional one. Many types of communication like with our colleagues are unavoidable, and we are less able to whether change it or stop. In contrast, we are free in our relationship with our friends; I mean we can choose our friends by own selves without others' hand, we are able to make some change our friendship how we like, and even we can change our friend-group. There are various dos and don’ts list among different friends due to friendship's optional nature. One of the most controversial questions among people is that whether or not they must keep their relationship with their friends if their friends do something or show some behaviors that they don’t like it. Even though, quite a few individuals are of the opinion that they shouldn’t continue their friendship in such a situation, but, I, personally subscribe to this idea that not only we must keep our relationships, but also we should try to make them stronger. In my points of view, such an occurrence in friendships are tied into essence of friendship, and more important thing, this situation help people to improve their personalities. In first place, psychologically speaking, human beings cannot get rid of mistakes towards others because of their mental problems, their shortage knowledge, their misunderstanding of situations, effect of cognitive bias in the commentary of one another's request, and so forth. By this in mind, we can say with utmost confidence that we wouldn’t have long-term friendship only if we be flexible enough towards our friends' behaviors. If we disconnect from our friends since they do something we don’t like, after a while we would see ourselves alone in which we will become mentally sick; we will get depression, we will not have a sense of community and so on. This approach is a prevalent one among people which I, as a one, see a lot in my surroundings. For instance, my brother has an idealistic definition for friendship. In his perspective, friends have to always know what kind of behaviors choose against each other. They must learn all emotional and demands of their friends, so accordingly they cannot make any mistake or things that others don’t like. Such an expectation make him a solitary person because he has not met such a friend, and he lost his best friends since he wasn’t permeable at all. Secondly, all human beings are imperfect, and it is obvious to most people eyes, so because of that they want to make comfortable relationships to step into the path of becoming perfect. We need a safe relationship with others to show what we really are to change our personality and adopt positive characteristics. Friendship is beyond the price relationship to do so, but only if we have some friends with high level of receptivity, kindness, to name but a few. If we cut off our relationship just because our friends' mistakes or bad behaviors in our viewpoint, we would get a priceless chance from our friends to correct their characters, and following that we would also lose our great chance to do so. It is not to mention that sometimes we interpret wrongly our upsets, and link it with another one's behavior, but if we think deeply we will find its root in ourselves. This awareness gives us a positive approach in our friendship by which we are able to increase our tolerance in our relationship to improve our personalities. For example, roughly two years ago, I was repeatedly getting upset from one of my best friend's behavior. There were many times in those days that I want to disconnect with her, but fortunately I didn’t do. As time went, I understood something was running in my mind in specific communication no matter who was against me, how he or she talked with me and so forth. It has been a turning point in my life because I realized that I had a bad experience in my childhood which was hidden in my mind. Every behavior whether good one or bad one that gave a little light to that experience made me anxious and disturbed. I set week times to see my doctor in order to talk about it, and finally I solved my mental problem because of that. I think if whether I had not been flexible those days with my friends or my friends had not tolerated me, I would not have been aware of my problem. In summary, by taking all of these into account, I think it is essential for everyone to keep their friendship even if their friends do something they don’t like. Such a manner not only bring people a good chance to have long-time friendship, but also give them a priceless relationship in which they can find their subconscious behavior, mental problem, and even a solution for them.
From down of civilization up to nowadays, human beings' communication have been increasing, from a basic and primary
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relationship
as
first
type to
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friendship
as an
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important
and optional one.
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Many
types of communication like with our colleagues are unavoidable, and we are less able to whether
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change
it or
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stop
.
In contrast
, we are free in our
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relationship
with our
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friends
; I mean we can choose our
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friends
by
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own
selves without others' hand, we are able to
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make
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some
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change
our
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friendship
how we like, and even we can
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change
our friend-group. There are various dos and don’ts list among
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different
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friends
due to friendship's optional nature. One of the most controversial questions among
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people
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is
that
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whether or not
they
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must
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keep
their
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relationship
with their
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friends
if their
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friends
do
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something
or
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show
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some
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behaviors
that they don’t like it.
Even though
, quite a few individuals are of the opinion that they shouldn’t continue their
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friendship
in such a situation,
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but
, I,
personally
subscribe to this
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idea
that not
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only
we
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must
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keep
our
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relationships
,
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but
also
we should try to
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make
them stronger. In my points of view, such an occurrence in
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friendships
are tied
into essence of
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friendship
, and more
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important
thing, this situation
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help
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people
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
their personalities.

In
first
place,
psychologically
speaking, human beings cannot
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
rid of mistakes towards others
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of their mental problems, their shortage knowledge, their misunderstanding of situations, effect of cognitive bias in the commentary of one another's request, and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
forth. By this in mind, we can say with utmost confidence that we wouldn’t have long-term
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friendship
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only
if we be flexible
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enough
towards our friends'
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behaviors
. If we disconnect from our
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friends
since they do
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something
we don’t like, after a while we would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
ourselves alone in which we will become mentally sick; we will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
depression, we will not have a sense of community and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
on. This approach is a prevalent one among
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
which I, as a one,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
a lot in my surroundings.
For instance
, my brother has an idealistic definition for
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friendship
. In his perspective,
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friends
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have to
always know what kind of
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behaviors
choose against each
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other
. They
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must
learn all emotional and demands of their
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friends
,
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so
accordingly
they cannot
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make
any mistake or things that others don’t like. Such an expectation
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make
him a solitary person
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because
he has not met such a
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friend
, and he lost his best
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friends
since he wasn’t permeable at all.

Secondly
, all human beings are imperfect, and it is obvious to most
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people
If 'people' is plural here, don't use the third-person singular verb.
eyes
,
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so
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because
of that they want to
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make
comfortable
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relationships
to step into the path of becoming perfect. We need a safe
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relationship
with others to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
what we
really
are to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
change
our personality and adopt
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positive
characteristics.
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Friendship
is beyond the price
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relationship
to do
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so
,
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but
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only
if we have
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some
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friends
with high level of receptivity, kindness, to name
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but
a few. If we
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cut
off our
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relationship
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just
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because
our friends' mistakes or
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bad
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behaviors
in our viewpoint, we would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
a priceless chance from our
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friends
to correct their characters, and following that we would
also
lose our great chance to do
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
. It is not to mention that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sometimes
we interpret
wrongly
our upsets, and link it with another one's
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
behavior
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
if we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
deeply
we will find its root in ourselves. This awareness gives us a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
approach in our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
friendship
by which we are able to increase our tolerance in our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
relationship
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
our personalities.
For example
, roughly two years ago, I was
repeatedly
getting upset from one of my best friend's
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
behavior
. There were
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
times in those days that I want to disconnect with her,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
fortunately
I didn’t do. As time went, I understood
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
something
was running in my mind in specific communication no matter who was against me, how he or she talked with me and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
forth. It has been a turning point in my life
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
I realized that I had a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
experience in my childhood which
was hidden
in my mind. Every
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
behavior
whether
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
one or
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
one that gave a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
little
light to that experience made me anxious and disturbed. I set week times to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
my doctor in order to talk about it, and
finally
I solved my mental problem
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of that. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
if whether I had not been flexible those days with my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
friends
or my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
friends
had not tolerated me, I would not have been aware of my problem.

In summary, by taking all of these into account, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
it is essential for everyone to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
friendship
even if their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
friends
do
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
something
they don’t like. Such a manner not
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
only
bring
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people
a
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good
chance to have long-time
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friendship
,
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but
also
give them a priceless
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
relationship
in which they can find their subconscious
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
behavior
, mental problem, and even a solution for them.
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IELTS essay You have long been friends with someone. If they do something that you don’t like, should you still be friends with them? (The Explanation type, generally one side of the issue is discussed)

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
836 words
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