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You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - thank your friend for the holiday - explain that you left your wallet in their h v.6

You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - thank your friend for the holiday - explain that you left your wallet in their h v. 6
Dear Shipra, I hope this letter finds you well. I have landed in Delhi safely. Thank you so much having me at your place for the holidays. All the places that you took me to were breathtaking and how can I forget about the food that you especially cooked for me? I am already missing the taste! It was a wonderful experience with you. I had a great time with you guys. When I get here, I realized that I forgot my wallet at your dining table. I was in so much of hurry that I forgot to pick it up. Thank God, I did not keep my passport in it otherwise, I would be stucked! Could you please courier it to my office address as I am spending most of my time there nowadays due to the new project work? My wallet has some important IDs of mine. Thank you again for inviting me at your house. You are an amazing host! Say hello to all. Take care. Warm regards, Kanchan
Dear
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Shipra
,

I hope this letter finds you well. I have landed in Delhi
safely
. Thank you
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so
much having me at your place for the holidays. All the places that you took me to were breathtaking and how can I forget about the food that you
especially
cooked for me? I am already missing the taste! It was a wonderful experience with you.

I had a great time with you guys. When I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
here, I realized that I forgot my wallet at your dining table. I was in
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
much of hurry that I forgot to pick it up. Thank God, I did not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
my passport in it
otherwise
, I would be
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stucked
!

Could you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
courier it to my office address as I am spending most of my time there nowadays due to the new project work? My wallet has
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
IDs of mine.

Thank you again for inviting me at your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
. You are an amazing host!

Say hello to all.

Take care.

Warm regards,

Possible spelling mistake found.
Kanchan
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS essay You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - thank your friend for the holiday - explain that you left your wallet in their h v. 6

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  American English
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171 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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