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You have been talking with your friends about buying presents for birthdays. In about 120 words, write an essay on how to save money to buy a gift for your mother. set

You have been talking with your friends about buying presents for birthdays. In about 120 words, write an essay on how to save money to buy a gift for your mother. set 11wxN

Is your mother’s birthday around the corner? Are you lacking money in buying her a present? Here are three ways to save and earn some money to buy a gift for her. First, if your parents give you pocket money everyday, you can control your spending of it and put aside the rest of the money in your piggy bank. After that, you can set a saving goal on how much money you need to save everyday to achieve your goal of buying a birthday gift for your mother. Besides that, you can also do some part-time jobs to gain extra income. Examples like washing the car for your neighbours, baby-sitting and newspaper delivery are suitable part-time jobs that you can choose. Through working part-time, you can even gain some working experience which is very beneficial for your future. Last but not least, you can make a priority between needs and wantsidentify which is more important. You can spend less in your wantsidentify, but to spend more in your daily needs such as food, water and clothes. Remember to jot down your spending in a notebook so that it is easier for you to balance your spending on things that are necessary and things that you want. In conclusion, you can save and earn some money for buying your mother’s birthday present by following these positive ways. You can even learn how to spend money wisely through it. After all, money doesn’t grow on trees! (245 words)

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 in buying her a present? Here are three ways to save and earn This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
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buy
 a gift for her.

First
, if your parents give you pocket You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalarywagewealthpaybillcash
money
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everyday
, you can control your spending of it and put aside the rest of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalarywagewealthpaybillcash
money
 in your piggy bank. After that, you can set a saving goal on how much You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalarywagewealthpaybillcash
money
 you need to save 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean "every day"?every day
everyday
 to achieve your goal of buying a birthday gift for your mother.

Besides
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some
 part-time jobs to gain extra income. Examples like washing the car for your Possible spelling mistake. 'neighbours' is British English.neighbors
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, baby-sitting and newspaper delivery are suitable part-time jobs that you can choose. Through working part-time, you can even gain This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 working experience which is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 beneficial for your future.

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but
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 a priority between needs and Possible spelling mistake found.wants identify
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important
. You can spend less in your Possible spelling mistake found.wants identify
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, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
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 to spend more in your daily needs such as food, water and clothes. Remember to jot down your spending in a notebook This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that it is easier for you to balance your spending on things that are necessary and things that you want.

In conclusion
, you can save and earn This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalarywagewealthpaybillcash
money
 for buying your mother’s birthday present by following these This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 ways. You can even learn how to spend You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalarywagewealthpaybillcash
money
wisely
 through it. After all
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalarywagewealthpaybillcash
money
 doesn’t grow on trees!

(245 words)