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An international research group is carrying out an investigation into the way in which the coronavirus lockdown has affected the lives of young people. You have been asked to write a report about the experiences of young people in Vietnam

An international research group is carrying out an investigation into the way in which the coronavirus lockdown has affected the lives of young people. You have been asked to write a report about the experiences of young people in Vietnam bEpNX

COVID-19 is considered as a fatal disease that can cause problems in breathing and eating systems of humans and animals. In addition, there has been no end to the spread of the coronavirus in communities. Vietnamese people’s life, especially the young ones, have also been radically affected by the pandemic. This report will offer an in depth evaluation of its impacts on youngsters in Vietnam. First and foremost, many areas have been in lockdown or quarantine due to the widespread of the virus. Therefore, schools are now closed and students have to study online. This method ensures the safety of the students while at the same time enables them to finish the school curriculum. Even though there are some issues when first learning online, most find it more comfortable than face-to-face classes since the time is flexible and they can wear casual clothes instead of uniforms. Nevertheless, online learning still poses a challenge for some students as they get distracted from their studies by the electronic devices.

COVID-19 is considered
 as a fatal disease that can cause problems in breathing and eating systems of humans and animals. In addition
, there has been no This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 to the spread of the coronavirus in communities. Vietnamese This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
’s life, especially
 the young ones, have also
 been radically
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :impacted
affected
 by the pandemic. This report will offer an in depth evaluation of its impacts on youngsters in Vietnam.

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 and foremost, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 areas have been in lockdown or quarantine due to The phrase 'the widespread of' is not correct. Use a noun, not an adjective, between 'the' and 'of'.
the widespread of
 the virus. Therefore
, schools are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 closed and students This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 study online. This method ensures the safety of the students while at the same time enables them to finish the school curriculum. Even though
 there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 issues when first
 learning online, most find it more comfortable than face-to-face classes since the time is Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).flexible, and
flexible and
 they can wear casual clothes instead
 of uniforms. Nevertheless
, online learning still
 poses a challenge for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 students as they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 distracted from their studies by the electronic devices. 