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Is Social networking sites damaging the minds of the younger generation?

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Social networking sites are not damaging the minds of the younger generation. First, the younger generation have their own circle of friends. They may effect by their friends but not lead to damage the minds. Also, social networking could make friend. It connect people to people from all over the world. The younger must can find someone that can talk with. Last, the younger generation might have value changing or learn new stuff via the social networking. For example, when they meet new people, they could learn something from them. Even the younger can get some value from others. In conclusion the social networking sites are not damage the younger. There have more value greater than disadvantage.

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