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You have been invited to deliver a speech about your country at the international meeting at an American college Write a letter to the secretary of the international community In your letter you should tell accept invitation and suggest preferable dates t v.2

You have been invited to deliver a speech about your country at the international meeting at an American college Write a letter to the secretary of the international community In your letter you should tell accept invitation and suggest preferable dates t v. 2
To be truth-teller or liar was a challenge for people in the whole world in history. All cultures and religions offer people to tell the fact, but sometimes they tend to tell lies for some reasons which most of them are lame excused. People tell the falsehood in order to control a situation. They opine that they give up control by telling the truth. Moreover, they don't want to disappoint those who are around them. They may be afraid of losing the respect. They are worried about you might reject or shame them. Also lies are assumed to be like a snowball. It is about how lie grows. You just tell a little bitty lie, then to cover that, you have to tell another one and another and another, each gets bigger and bigger. The more telling lie, easier to tell it, thus the liars tell lies more and more. In most situations telling the falsehood is not acceptable due to harming other people, for instance, when you tell a lie about the price of goods which are cheaper than you want to sell, but sometimes you can give a chance other people enjoy their life by telling the fiction, for example consider a doctor who tells a tale about health conditions of a patient whom there is not hope to survive him or her. In spite of telling lies which are unacceptable in religion and culture, the behaviour of a doctor is admirable. In conclusion, no one accepts to hear lies, but sometimes listening to white lie is better than bitter truth. People should deny telling lies for their personal benefits. These lies, not only harm other people, but also may lead the others don't trust you. Therefore, it is one of significant importance to be careful about what you say.
To be truth-teller or liar was a challenge for
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people
in the whole world in history. All cultures and religions offer
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people
to
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tell
the fact,
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but
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sometimes
they tend to
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tell
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lies
for
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some
reasons which most of them are lame excused.
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People
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tell
the falsehood in order to control a situation. They opine that they give up control by
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telling
the truth.

Moreover
, they don't want to disappoint those who are around them. They may be afraid of losing the respect. They
are worried
about you might reject or shame them.
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Also
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lies
are assumed
to be like a snowball. It is about how
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lie
grows. You
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just
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tell
a
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little
bitty
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lie
, then to cover that, you
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have to
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tell
another one and another and another, each
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gets
bigger and bigger. The more
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telling
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lie
, easier to
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tell
it,
thus
the liars
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tell
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lies
more and more.

In most situations
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telling
the falsehood is not acceptable due to harming
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other
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people
,
for instance
, when you
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tell
a
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lie
about the price of
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goods
which are cheaper than you want to sell,
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but
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sometimes
you can give a chance
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other
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people
enjoy their life by
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telling
the fiction,
for example
consider a doctor who
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tells
a tale about health conditions of a patient whom there is not hope to survive him or her.
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In spite of
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telling
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lies
which are unacceptable in religion and culture, the
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behaviour
of a doctor is admirable.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
In
conclusion, no one accepts to hear
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lies
,
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but
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sometimes
listening to white
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lie
is better than bitter truth.
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People
should deny
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telling
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lies
for their personal benefits. These
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lies
, not
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only
harm
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other
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people
,
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but
also
may lead the others don't trust you.
Therefore
, it is one of significant importance to be careful about what you say.
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7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay You have been invited to deliver a speech about your country at the international meeting at an American college Write a letter to the secretary of the international community In your letter you should tell accept invitation and suggest preferable dates t v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
302 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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