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You have been invited to deliver a speech about your country at the international meeting at an American college. Write a letter to the secretary of the international community. In your letter, you should tell: accept invitation and suggest preferable dates tell them what your talks will be about and what equipment you require them to arrange. v.1

You have been invited to deliver a speech about your country at the international meeting at an American college. Write a letter to the secretary of the international community. In your letter, you should tell: accept invitation and suggest preferable dates tell them what your talks will be about and what equipment you require them to arrange. v. 1
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to accept the invitation to deliver a speech about the culture of India at the international conference being organized at an American college. With regard to the invitation, I would like to say thank you for providing me with this opportunity to speak. It would be my honour to address the international audience at such a large scale. As for the event dates, It would be a good idea to schedule this event on 15th February, which is a weekend and I hope everyone would be able to attend. As far as the topic of the speech is concerned, I would like to talk about the rich and diverse culture of my country, India. Firstly, I will cover the history of the nation, followed by the various languages spoken by the locals and the cuisines popular in the different regions of the country. Last but not least, I would be happy to welcome the suggestions from the members of the community if they would particularly want me to cover anything. On the day of the event, I would appreciate if you could arrange a microphone and recording equipment. The use of a microphone would make me audible to the wide audience. In addition to this, it would be very kind of you if you could provide an assistant to distribute the handouts of my speech. This may help the foreign audience to understand my accent. Once again, thank you for considering me for this event. I look forward to being a part of a program. Yours faithfully, Ell Green
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to accept the invitation to deliver a speech about the culture of India at the international conference
being organized
at an American college.

With regard to the invitation, I would like to say thank you for providing me with this opportunity to speak. It would be my
Possible spelling mistake. 'honour' is British English.
honour
to address the international audience at such a large scale. As for the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
event
dates, It would be a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
idea
to schedule this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
event
on 15th February, which is a weekend and I hope everyone would be able to attend.

As far as the topic of the speech
is concerned
, I would like to talk about the rich and diverse culture of my country, India.
Firstly
, I will cover the history of the nation, followed by the various languages spoken by the locals and the cuisines popular in the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
regions of the country. Last
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
not least, I would be happy to welcome the suggestions from the members of the community if they would
particularly
want me to cover anything.

On the day of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
event
, I would appreciate if you could arrange a microphone and recording equipment. The
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of a microphone would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
me audible to the wide audience.
In addition
to this, it would be
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
kind of you if you could provide an assistant to distribute the handouts of my speech. This may
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
the foreign audience to understand my accent.

Once again, thank you for considering me for this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
event
. I look forward to being a part of a program.

Yours
faithfully
,

Ell Green
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS essay You have been invited to deliver a speech about your country at the international meeting at an American college. Write a letter to the secretary of the international community. In your letter, you should tell: accept invitation and suggest preferable dates tell them what your talks will be about and what equipment you require them to arrange. v. 1

Essay
  American English
8 paragraphs
265 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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