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You had a problem with the flight staff on a recent flight Write a letter to the airline to manage to complain Include the flight details Explain what happened Tell the manager what you want them to do v.1

You had a problem with the flight staff on a recent flight Write a letter to the airline to manage to complain Include the flight details Explain what happened Tell the manager what you want them to do v. 1
In order to keep surviving, preserving nature has nowadays become the utmost requirement. Not only should this be the responsibility of the regimes that run the countries, every individual should play their part in it. This essay will discuss the issues governments face while building accommodations for the masses and to protect the climate at the same time. First and foremost, in order to construct a durable home, it is required to use materials such as concrete, to provide strength and stability to the structure. Usage of such materials releases an enormous amount of carbon dioxide in the air, which in turn makes it harmful to breathe. The ruling parties should make sure that while construction alternative materials should be used in order to ensure that the environment is not harmed. To illustrate, the use of asbestos should be promoted instead of concrete as not only it releases less CO2, it also provides better durability to the structure. While the administration should keep the surroundings in mind, it should also ensure to implement best practices to ensure that it has enough homes for its people to stay. Implementation of organic ways to dispose of waste should be introduced by the governing agencies, especially in the high rise buildings to make sure that none of the waste disposal results in the generation of hazardous gases which makes it hard for people to live. In my opinion, it is necessary for the government to have sufficient houses ready to ensure that people get to have a roof over their head, nonetheless, it can look forward towards implementation of alternatives which are not harmful to the habitat.
In order to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
surviving, preserving nature has nowadays become the utmost requirement. Not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
should this be the responsibility of the regimes that run the countries, every individual should play their part in it. This essay will discuss the issues
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
governments
face while building accommodations for the masses and to protect the climate at the same time.

First
and foremost, in order to construct a durable home, it
is required
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
materials such as concrete, to provide strength and stability to the structure. Usage of such materials releases an enormous amount of carbon dioxide in the air, which in turn
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
makes
it harmful to breathe. The ruling parties should
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
make
sure that while construction alternative materials should be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
in order to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ensure
that the environment is not harmed. To illustrate, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of asbestos should
be promoted
instead
of concrete as not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
it releases less CO2, it
also
provides better durability to the structure.

While the administration should
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
the surroundings in mind, it should
also
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ensure
to implement best practices to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ensure
that it has
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
homes for its
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
to stay. Implementation of organic ways to dispose of waste should
be introduced
by the governing agencies,
especially
in the high rise buildings to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
make
sure that none of the waste disposal results in the generation of hazardous gases which
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
makes
it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
for
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
.

In my opinion, it is necessary for the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
to have sufficient
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
houses
ready to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ensure
that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
to have a roof over their head, nonetheless, it can look forward towards implementation of alternatives which are not harmful to the habitat.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes
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IELTS essay You had a problem with the flight staff on a recent flight Write a letter to the airline to manage to complain Include the flight details Explain what happened Tell the manager what you want them to do v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
274 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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