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Write a letter to the manager to complain about the problems that you met on the flight recently. 3. 46 - 4. 00In your letter, you should: - give details of flight- what were the issues with the flight. - what you want the manager to do about it. v.1

Write a letter to the manager to complain about the problems that you met on the flight recently. 3. 46 - 4. 00In your letter, you should: - give details of flight- what were the issues with the flight. - what you want the manager to do about it. v. 1
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter regarding the pathetic service and the unprofessional attitude of your staff, which I witnessed as I was flying back from Malaysia to Auckland in flight number B-106201. I had requested for a Jain meal prior to the flight for which I had also received a confirmation mail, that I am attaching with this letter. However, I was served with a Vegetarian meal at the lunch time, which I could not consume because of religious beliefs. Your staff was unapologetic for their mistake, furthermore, they served me with few loaves of bread, yogurt and fruits as there was no other food option available. It was a long 14 hours flight and I was starving the entire journey. I would want you to take some strict actions, against this incident and also get compensation for the discomfort that I had to suffer. I would be eagerly waiting for your response. Thank you, Ashish
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter regarding the pathetic service and the unprofessional attitude of your staff, which I witnessed as I was flying back from Malaysia to Auckland in flight number B-106201.

I had requested for a Jain meal prior to the flight for which I had
also
received a confirmation mail, that I am attaching with this letter.
However
, I
was served
with a Vegetarian meal at the
lunch time
, which I could not consume
because
of religious beliefs. Your staff was unapologetic for their mistake,
furthermore
, they served me with few loaves of bread, yogurt and fruits as there was no other food option available.

It was a long 14 hours
flight and
I was starving the entire journey. I would want you to take
some
strict actions, against this incident and
also
get
compensation for the discomfort that I had to suffer.

I would be
eagerly
waiting for your response.

Thank you,

Ashish
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS essay Write a letter to the manager to complain about the problems that you met on the flight recently. 3. 46 - 4. 00In your letter, you should: - give details of flight- what were the issues with the flight. - what you want the manager to do about it. v. 1

Essay
  American English
7 paragraphs
159 words
This writing has been penalized,
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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