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The chart below chows the total number of minutes (in billion) of telephone calls in UK, divided into three categories from 1995-2002. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant. v.1

The chart below chows the total number of minutes (in billion) of telephone calls in UK, divided into three categories from 1995-2002.
As the saying "A picture says a thousand words", it is irrefutable to say that pictorial representations are a very powerful tool of communication. In my perspective, images or films are often more effective in sending out a message than the written word. This essay gingerly delineates the viewpoints in the following paragraphs. Words, sometimes turn out to be difficult to convey messages. Furthermore, photographs, images or films can be used to target the illiterate crowd. For example, history is better understood when visualised or when it is seen as a part of a motion picture. The target population would be larger, as a result, advertisements are usually in the pictorial form rather than written form, this in turn helps brands to increase their brand value and reach by catering to the literate and uneducated class of society. On the other hand, pictures have a chance of being misinterpreted by the masses. Moreover, movies made on history are often tweaked in order to make content more entertaining for the public; this could sometimes lead to hurting people's sentiments. To substantiate further, books which are written are often made into movies, which undeniably have facts and stories changed in order to appeal to the crowd. To exemplify further, the written word has lesser chances of being misinterpreted, thus, making information more reliable. To recapitulate, pictures and movies have undeniably gained popularity in the recent times. It has become a powerful way of information transfer. However, one must be careful in deducing the content to avoid confusion
As the saying
"
A
picture
says a thousand words
"
, it is irrefutable to say that pictorial representations are a
very
powerful tool of communication. In my perspective, images or films are
often
more effective in sending out a message than the
written
word. This essay
gingerly
delineates the viewpoints in the following paragraphs.

Words,
sometimes
turn out to be difficult to convey messages.
Furthermore
, photographs, images or films can be
used
to target the illiterate crowd.
For example
, history is better understood when
visualised
or when it is
seen
as a part of a motion
picture
. The target population would be larger,
as a result
, advertisements are
usually
in the pictorial form
rather
than
written
form, this in turn
helps
brands to increase their brand value and reach by catering to the literate and uneducated
class
of society.

On the other hand
,
pictures
have a chance of
being misinterpreted
by the masses.
Moreover
, movies made on history are
often
tweaked in order to
make
content more entertaining for the public; this could
sometimes
lead to hurting
people
's sentiments. To substantiate
further
, books which are
written
are
often
made into movies, which
undeniably
have facts and stories
changed
in order to appeal to the crowd. To exemplify
further
, the
written
word has lesser chances of
being misinterpreted
,
thus
, making information more reliable.

To
recapitulate,
pictures
and movies have
undeniably
gained popularity in the recent times. It has become a powerful way of information transfer.
However
, one
must
be careful in deducing the content to avoid confusion
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay The chart below chows the total number of minutes (in billion) of telephone calls in UK, divided into three categories from 1995-2002.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
254 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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