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You are the major of HCMC. You have just received one billion US dollars from international organization to improve the city’s living condition

You are the major of HCMC. You have just received one billion US dollars from international organization to improve the city’s living condition NyW6N
As the major, I support to three solution to improve the city’s living condition with one billion US dollars. First, Plant more trees in two sides of streets, the oxyden in trees in the morning will help the air more fresh, and we don’t need to water the plants too much. It’s a good benefit about air and economy water. Urban sanitation remains an important challenge in many cities, so the second is cleaning. That means I will pay for cleaners, to clean the city, collecting garbage, recycle plastic, hiring road sweeper with a street sweeper, it takes less time and more comfort. Finally, Organize used market once a month, and let everyone enjoy to clean up their house with things they don’t used, and sell them to get money and also help the tourist to know and visit our city. We can advertise our city for more people know, about the fresh city in this country.
As the major, I support to three solution to
improve
the city’s living condition with one billion US dollars.
First
, Plant more trees in two sides of streets, the
oxyden
in trees in the morning will
help
the air more fresh, and we don’t need to water the plants too much. It’s a
good
benefit about air and economy water. Urban sanitation remains an
important
challenge in
many
cities
,
so
the second is cleaning. That means I will pay for cleaners, to clean the city, collecting garbage, recycle plastic, hiring road sweeper with a street sweeper, it takes less time and more comfort.
Finally
, Organize
used
market once a month, and
let
everyone
enjoy to clean
up their
house
with things they don’t
used
, and sell them to
get
money and
also
help
the tourist to know and visit our city. We can advertise our city for more
people
know, about the fresh city in this country.
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IELTS essay You are the major of HCMC. You have just received one billion US dollars from international organization to improve the city’s living condition

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