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you are organising a family party

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I would love it if you could come to our son's birthday party that will be held on 25 th May 2021 at 18: 30 pm onwards on our family members and close friends. At the event funny games for children and their parents, singing and also dancing will be performed by our extended family. We also arranged Turkish Dish for the dinner actually delicious cakes and biscuits are waiting the guests. I hope you will be able to make it. Here a few directions so you do not get lost. Hotel ''Tajmahal'' in the center of town. we look forward to your presence.
I would
love
it if you could
come
to our son's birthday party that will
be held
on
25 th
May 2021 at 18: 30 pm onwards on our family members and close friends. At the
event
funny
games for children and their parents, singing and
also
dancing will
be performed
by our extended family. We
also
arranged Turkish Dish for the dinner actually delicious cakes and biscuits are waiting the guests. I hope you will be able to
make
it. Here a few directions
so
you do not
get
lost. Hotel ''
Tajmahal
'' in the center of town.
we
look forward to your presence.
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IELTS essay you are organising a family party

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
104 words
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