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describe why it is your favourite animal

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Well India is a diverse country there are different kind of animals like pet animals, wild animals as well as domestic animals but here I would like to talk about the animal which I like the most it is not only another it is a dolphin. I really like the dolphin because of its cuteness. Moreover I like it because of its beautiful looking. Interesting lit is looking like a fish and it is very cute. To be honest first time I saw the dolphin in the zoo actually it was two years ago that time of my friends have a burning desire to visit the zoo and we planned to go to the zoo which is stone throw away from my friends house and there We saw a lot of animals but when I saw the dolphin and it looks amazing and it was very cute animal and I like it because of interesting habits. For instance, it can learn easily like how to play a football and I visit the dolphin show in which dolphin played a football with his partner. Therefore, We can say that dolphin has good cognitive skills and so that’s why I like these animals very much and it is a interesting animal in the world and nowadays i am writing a book on a dolphin in which I explicate all the features and all the interesting habits of a dolphin. In the end i would like to say that dolphin is one of the animal which is liked by me.
Well India is a diverse country there are
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animals
like pet
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, wild
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here I would like to talk about the
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which I like the most it is not
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another it is a dolphin. I
really
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I like it
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lit is looking like a fish and it is
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cute. To be honest
first
time I
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saw
the dolphin in the zoo actually it was two years ago that time of my friends have a burning desire to visit the
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zoo and
we planned to go to the zoo which is stone throw away from my friends
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and there We
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when I
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saw
the dolphin and it looks amazing and it was
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cute
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and I like it
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interesting
habits.
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like how to play a football and I visit the dolphin
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in which dolphin played a football with his partner.
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, We can say that dolphin has
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cognitive
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that’s why I like these
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animals
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much and it is
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in the world and nowadays
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am writing a book on a dolphin in which I explicate all the features and all the
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habits of a dolphin. In the
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would like to say that dolphin is one of the
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by me.
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IELTS essay describe why it is your favourite animal

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
257 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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