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todays world of nonsense in every type of food is available in my home for eating becausr this will ensure our safety. It has less oil and less fat .I prefer more gym activity then running to the fact that world is full of lies.because my name is saurabh batish From school budha dal public school ludiana from punjab from India because in am punjabi from heart and from mind . I love Bombay and Delhi bacause of their street food .There is a chaap store for fast food and i an loving it.

todays world of nonsense in every type of food is available in my home for eating becausr this will ensure our safety. It has less oil and less fat. I prefer more gym activity then running to the fact that world is full of lies. because my name is saurabh batish From school budha dal public school ludiana from punjab from India because in am punjabi from heart and from mind. I love Bombay and Delhi bacause of their street food. There is a chaap store for fast food and i an loving it. 85EAw
todays world of nonsense in every type of food is available in my home for eating becausr this will ensure our safety. It has less oil and less fat. I prefer more gym activity then running to the fact that world is full of lies. because my name is saurabh batish From school budha dal public school ludiana from punjab from India because in am punjabi from heart and from mind. I love Bombay and Delhi bacause of their street food. There is a chaap store for fast food and i an loving it.
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world of nonsense in every type of food is available in my home for eating
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becausr
this will ensure our safety. It has less oil and less
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fat
. I prefer more gym activity
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then
running to the fact that world is full of lies.
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because
my name is
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saurabh
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batish
From school
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budha
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dal
public school
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ludiana
from
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punjab
from India
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because
in am
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punjabi
from heart and from mind. I
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love
Bombay and Delhi
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bacause
of their street food. There is a
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chaap
store for
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fast
food and i
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an
loving it.
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IELTS essay todays world of nonsense in every type of food is available in my home for eating becausr this will ensure our safety. It has less oil and less fat. I prefer more gym activity then running to the fact that world is full of lies. because my name is saurabh batish From school budha dal public school ludiana from punjab from India because in am punjabi from heart and from mind. I love Bombay and Delhi bacause of their street food. There is a chaap store for fast food and i an loving it.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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