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You are organising a charity event at your school/college/lyceum to raise money for the local orphanage.

You are organising a charity event at your school/college/lyceum to raise money for the local orphanage. 2bnEj

Ilhomjon Esonboyev. Dangara district. ilxomjonesonboyev@gmail. com. 91 202 4155May 18th 2021Sohibaxon Mamajonova director 1st specialized boarding-school, Tegirmonboshi village. Mrs SohibaxonI am writing to organise a charity event at our lyceum to raise money for the local orphanage. I am making a meeting to settle a charity organisation that helps provide orphans with necessary eclectic equipment they need. It will be held in the library of Dangara at the centre. I respectly invite the school management to attend the event. I want to know if you would be interested in sponsoring the charity. I am particularly grateful for your attention that is vital for children who have not got parents. Your support has meant so much to me. Thanks and best wishes.

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