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You are organising a charity event at your school/college/lyceum to raise money for the local orphanage.

You are organising a charity event at your school/college/lyceum to raise money for the local orphanage. 2bnEj
Ilhomjon Esonboyev. Dangara district. ilxomjonesonboyev@gmail. com. 91 202 4155May 18th 2021Sohibaxon Mamajonova director 1st specialized boarding-school, Tegirmonboshi village. Mrs SohibaxonI am writing to organise a charity event at our lyceum to raise money for the local orphanage. I am making a meeting to settle a charity organisation that helps provide orphans with necessary eclectic equipment they need. It will be held in the library of Dangara at the centre. I respectly invite the school management to attend the event. I want to know if you would be interested in sponsoring the charity. I am particularly grateful for your attention that is vital for children who have not got parents. Your support has meant so much to me. Thanks and best wishes.
Ilhomjon
Esonboyev
.
Dangara
district.
ilxomjonesonboyev@gmail
.
com
. 91 202 4155May 18th 2021Sohibaxon
Mamajonova
director 1st specialized boarding-school,
Tegirmonboshi
village. Mrs
SohibaxonI
am
writing to
organise
a charity
event
at our lyceum to raise money for the local orphanage. I am making a meeting to settle a charity
organisation
that
helps
provide orphans with necessary eclectic equipment they need. It will
be held
in the library of
Dangara
at the
centre
. I
respectly
invite the school management to attend the
event
. I want to know if you would
be interested
in sponsoring the charity.
I
am
particularly
grateful for your attention
that is
vital for children who have not
got
parents. Your support has meant
so
much to me. Thanks and best wishes.
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IELTS essay You are organising a charity event at your school/college/lyceum to raise money for the local orphanage.

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  American English
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121 words
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