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Some people say that children should learn from books others say that they should learn from computer. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

Some people say that children should learn from books others say that they should learn from computer. PVPqB
With the advancement in technology more and more people nowadays are abounding traditional skills and adopting the modern developments. However, there are predominately two contrasting views where a section of society vehemently deems that children must learn from paper books while others emphasise that for learning computer should be used by children. In my opinion, I agree with the later notion due to the reasons elucidated below. Apparently, some believe that children should be learn from e-books for myriad reasons. Chiefly, computers provide ample of Latest knowledge to children because information on computer is updated everyday as per the happening of events around the world. Additionally, e-books don't have a weight or occupy space if schools adopt e-books readers, students will not have to carry heavy textbooks. Besides this, computers improve students performance as they can learn not only by reading but can also you use video tools for better understanding of the concept. As per the eminent psychologist Dr. Ricard Brown while learning using visualisation makes learning extremely interested and has long lasting impact on child's mind. Hence, help pupils in scoring excellent marks. On the other hand, various factors make a section of people advocate that learning from books is essential and have many reasons to substantiate it. First and foremost is, reading from printed books have no side effect on the eyes of the reader this is because there is no harmful radiations from reading paper as a result children can read for longer hours, moreover eco friendly colours Are used for printing them. Secondly, on country side Internet facility is not adequate so children should be encouraged to learn from books instead of e-books. For instance, in northern part of india internet facility is not working properly due to climate conditions as a result its not possible for learners to read from kindle and other apps. Therefore, printed books are preferred to read. In my profound opinion, both the groups have valid justification for their viewpoint However, use of computer is vital for making complex process of learning interactive for pupils as it provide voluminous resources of information and easy to carry.
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people
nowadays are abounding traditional
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skills
and adopting the modern developments.
However
, there are
predominately
two contrasting views where a section of society
vehemently
deems that
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children
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must
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learn
from paper
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books
while others
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emphasise
that for
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learning
computer should be
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used
by
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children
. In my opinion, I
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agree
with the later notion due to the reasons elucidated below.

Apparently
,
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some
believe that
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children
should be
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learn
from e-books for myriad reasons.

Chiefly
, computers provide ample of
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Latest
knowledge to
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children
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because
information on computer
is updated
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everyday
as per the happening of
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events
around the world.
Additionally
, e-books don't have a weight or occupy space if schools adopt e-books readers, students will not
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have to
carry heavy textbooks.
Besides
this, computers
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improve
students performance as they can
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learn
not
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only
by reading
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but
can
also
you
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use
video tools for better understanding of the concept. As per the eminent psychologist Dr.
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Ricard
Brown while
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learning
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using
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visualisation
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makes
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learning
extremely
interested and has
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long lasting
impact on child's mind.
Hence
,
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help
pupils in scoring excellent marks.

On the other hand
, various factors
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make
a section of
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people
advocate that
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learning
from
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books
is essential and have
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many
reasons to substantiate it.
First
and foremost is, reading from printed
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books
have no side effect on the eyes of the reader this is
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because
there is no harmful radiations from reading paper
as a result
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children
can read for longer hours,
moreover
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eco friendly
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colours
Are
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used
for printing them.
Secondly
, on country side Internet facility is not adequate
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so
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children
should
be encouraged
to
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learn
from
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books
instead
of e-books.
For instance
, in northern part of
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india
internet facility is not working
properly
due to climate conditions
as a result
its not possible for learners to read from kindle and other apps.
Therefore
, printed
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books
are preferred
to read.

In my profound opinion, both the groups have valid justification for their viewpoint
However
,
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use
of computer is vital for making complex process of
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learning
interactive for pupils as it provide voluminous resources of information and easy to carry.
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IELTS essay Some people say that children should learn from books others say that they should learn from computer.

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