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You are going to graduate next year and want to find a job. What will you do to find a good job? Who can you ask for help?

You are going to graduate next year and want to find a job. What will you do to find a good job? Who can you ask for help? BMkWw
I will graduate next year and will have to find a job soon after. I'll apply for an assistant job in a foreign company because salary and working conditions in foreign companies are quite good, and I will gain a lot of experience. Getting a job like this is not easy, especially for fresh graduates. Since these companies require high levels of English, I need to study very hard by myself and through English classes. In addition, creating a great CV is vital to impressing employers. Therefore, I plan to take some related courses such as computer skill and financial markets. These could give me an advantage over other applicants. Besides searching for jobs via the internet, I ask family or friends if they know of any companies that I'm interested in.
I will graduate
next
year and will
have to
find a
job
soon
after. I'll apply for an assistant
job
in a foreign
company
because
salary and working conditions in foreign
companies
are quite
good
, and I will gain
a lot of
experience. Getting a
job
like this is not easy,
especially
for fresh graduates. Since these
companies
require high levels of English, I need to study
very
hard
by myself and through English classes.
In addition
, creating a great CV is vital to impressing employers.
Therefore
, I plan to take
some
related courses such as computer
skill
and financial markets. These could give me an advantage over other applicants.
Besides
searching for
jobs
via the internet, I ask family or friends if they know of any
companies
that I'm interested in.
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IELTS essay You are going to graduate next year and want to find a job. What will you do to find a good job? Who can you ask for help?

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  American English
1 paragraphs
132 words
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