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The world’s total forest area is decreasing faster than ever. What are the main causes of deforestation? What can be done to combat the problems?

The world’s total forest area is decreasing faster than ever. What are the main causes of deforestation? What can be done to combat the problems? Q8qn1
Nowadays, the existence of human beings is threatened by the rapid global decrease of forested areas known as deforestation. The causes of this phenomenon are multifactorial, thus need a systematic approach from government organizations and individuals to tackle the problem. To begin with, the main causes of current global warming are, firstly, the construction of human infrastructures has been driving deforestation. To be more precise, in terms of transportation, new roads, rails have been built to transport goods such as fruit, fossil fuels, and even fresh meat. As a result, more trees will be cut to build these transportation infrastructures. The recent research, which was held by Oxford University, found that 15% of forested area has been disappeared because of new construction. In addition, urbanization has resulted in the loss of trees all over the world. It is expected that 80% of people who live in rural areas will move to cities in the next few decades. Consequently, as cities must become larger to host more people, the surrounding areas will be destroyed. There are two viable solutions to tackle and prevent deforestation from becoming worse. The measures that the government of all nations should take to reduce the disappearance of forest areas are, firstly, conserving the forest area by implementing strict norms and encouraging planting more trees in the cities. Secondly, raising people's awareness is another effective way to reduce the number of trees that will be cut in the future. To conclude, there are numerous factors leading to deforestation, including the construction of new infrastructures and the populational shift that is leading people to move from rural areas to urban areas; however, the problem can be solved by imposing stricter rules to protect forests and raising community awareness.
Nowadays, the existence of human beings
is threatened
by the rapid global decrease of forested
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areas
known as
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deforestation
. The causes of this phenomenon are multifactorial,
thus
need a systematic approach from
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government
organizations and individuals to tackle the problem.

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begin
with, the main causes of
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current
global warming are,
firstly
, the construction of human infrastructures has been driving
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deforestation
. To be more precise, in terms of transportation, new roads, rails have
been built
to transport
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goods
such as fruit, fossil fuels, and even fresh meat.
As a result
, more
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trees
will be
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cut
to build these transportation infrastructures. The recent research, which
was held
by Oxford University, found that 15% of forested
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area
has
been disappeared
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because
of new construction.
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, urbanization has resulted in the loss of
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trees
all over the world. It is
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expected
that 80% of
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live
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move
to cities in the
next
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must
become larger to host more
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people
, the surrounding
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prevent
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deforestation
from becoming worse. The measures that the
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government
of all nations should take to
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reduce
the disappearance of forest
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are,
firstly
, conserving the forest
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by implementing strict norms and encouraging planting more
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trees
in the cities.
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, raising
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people
's awareness is another effective way to
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reduce
the number of
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trees
that will be
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cut
in the future.

To conclude
, there are numerous factors leading to
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deforestation
, including the construction of new infrastructures and the
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populational
shift
that is
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people
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move
from rural
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to urban
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, the problem can
be solved
by imposing stricter
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rules
to protect forests and raising community awareness.
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IELTS essay The world’s total forest area is decreasing faster than ever. What are the main causes of deforestation? What can be done to combat the problems?

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