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illustrations depict a certain city where underwent some changes between two periods over the course of 5 years starting in 2005.

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Both provided illustrations depict a certain city where underwent some changes between two periods over the course of 5 years starting in 2005. Generally, it can be observed that the place experienced a significant transformation after five years. The main road which led to the golf course had been prolonged in total while the other had no touch and the railway which was located perpendicularly to both roads also demonstrated the same status. In 2005, on the right side of the railway there was a farm section and in a close vicinity of that was the church. In term of the left side of the railway, the plant which was surrounded by a circle of trees was in a proximity with a port. In 2010, the golf course had been converted completely into a golf course. The port was moved slightly near the waterflow and a warehouse had been constructed. Along side with the main street which led to the factory, a part of trees had been logged down for erecting a hospital which situated in the opposite of the hotel, the bus stop had been relocated to the place where in a close distance with the church and a railway station had been built parallel with the railway.
Both provided illustrations depict a certain city where underwent
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some
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changes
between two periods over the
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course
of 5 years starting in 2005.

Generally
, it can
be observed
that the place experienced a significant transformation after five years. The main road which led to the golf
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course
had
been prolonged
in total while the other had no touch and the
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railway
which
was located
perpendicularly
to both roads
also
demonstrated the same status.

In 2005, on the right side of the
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railway
there was a farm section and in a close vicinity of that was the church. In term of the
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left
side of the
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railway
, the plant which
was surrounded
by a circle of trees was in a proximity with a port.

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In
2010, the golf
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course
had
been converted
completely into a golf
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course
. The port was
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moved
slightly
near the
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waterflow
and a warehouse had
been constructed
.
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Along side
with the main street which led to the factory, a part of trees had
been logged
down for erecting a hospital which situated in the opposite of the hotel, the bus
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stop
had
been relocated
to the place where in a close distance with the church and a
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railway
station had
been built
parallel with the
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railway
.
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IELTS essay illustrations depict a certain city where underwent some changes between two periods over the course of 5 years starting in 2005.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
209 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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