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You are due to star a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problem. Write a letter to your new employer. - explain your situation. - describe your problems. - tell him/ her when you think can start the job. v. 1

The views of the older and newer generations are always contradictory. Some people believe that the youth should emulate the older generation while others believe that questioning the latter is productive. In my essay, I would discuss both sides of the argument before reaching a conclusion. On the one hand, following the elders’ footsteps would help one prepare to endure any situation knowledgeably. The views of the elderly are realistic and influential, since, they come from the real-world experiences of both failures and successes. Thus, pursuing the proven path of one’s ancestors is better suited to succeed in life. For instance, the autobiography of Mahatma Ghandi, ‘The story of my experiments with truth’, will prepare today’s individuals to build an optimistic mindset and gratification in being self-reliant. On the other hand, criticism of the older people’s opinions by the young minds has resulted in a healthier world with fewer superstitions. Many times, our ancestors have imposed certain opinions and traditions on us based on illogical and mistaken beliefs. With the masses following them blindly, individual’s and nation's growth are hampered. The inquisition by present generation has resulted in a changed and improved society free of unscientific practices. For example, the earlier generation’sgeneration’s opined that women are mentally incapable of pursuing jobs outside their households, whereas the condemnation by today’s generation has forged indisputable respect for women’s mental strength in the society. In conclusion, the opposing thoughts of the two distinct generations are continuously on a rise. However, I believe that the younger generation should follow the positive way of living shown by the elders, while understanding and analysing the basis for such views and experiences.

IELTS essay You are due to star a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problem. Write a letter to your new employer. - explain your situation. - describe your problems. - tell him/ her when you think can start the job. v.1

The views of the older and newer generations are always contradictory.
Some
people
believe that the youth should emulate the older generation while others believe that questioning the latter is productive. In my essay, I would discuss both sides of the argument
before
reaching a conclusion.

On the one hand, following the elders’ footsteps would
help
one prepare to endure any situation
knowledgeably
. The views of the elderly are realistic and influential, since, they
come
from the real-world experiences of both failures and successes.
Thus
, pursuing the proven path of one’s ancestors is better suited to succeed in life.
For instance
, the autobiography of Mahatma
Ghandi
, ‘The story of my experiments with truth’, will prepare
today
’s individuals to build an optimistic mindset and gratification in being self-reliant.

On the other hand
, criticism of the older
people
’s opinions by the young minds has resulted in a healthier world with fewer superstitions.
Many
times, our ancestors have imposed certain opinions and traditions on us based on illogical and mistaken beliefs. With the masses following them
blindly
, individual’s and nation's growth
are hampered
. The inquisition by present generation has resulted in a
changed
and
improved
society free of unscientific practices.
For example
, the earlier generation’
sgeneration
’s opined that women are mentally incapable of pursuing jobs outside their households, whereas the condemnation by
today
’s generation has forged indisputable respect for women’s mental strength in the society.

In conclusion
, the opposing thoughts of the two distinct generations are
continuously
on a rise.
However
, I believe that the younger generation should follow the
positive
way of living shown by the elders, while understanding and
analysing
the basis for such views and experiences.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes
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Essay
4 paragraphs
275 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resources: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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