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Writing task 2: With the advent of the internet, increasing numbers of people are shopping online. What issues arise from this and how can they be tackled?

As the world progresses, the internet in developing many people are doing shops via the internet, instead of going markets. This essay below will analyze some explonations for this situation as well as how to alleviate it. One of the underlying reason for this problem, people are becoming less active and lazy in their lifestyle. In addition, they are opting cozy way to purchase things from sitting place without actions. For example, more INHABITANTS around the world are stopped to buy products from markets, otherwise they are shopping online regardless of the cost. Thus, the advent of the internet have changed the way people choses. There are two principal factors that solved prevent. The first solution is we should not relice on internet too much, besides the customers should made a advertising within affordable costs, not only cheap prizes but also qualitative products to the society. For instance, If children educate not to depend on internet in other words use phones and computers less, they will do active way about shopping. The another most effective tackle is shops like supermarket, restaurant, should make advertisements and organize some kind of attractive competition among the buyers. For example, people purchase food, clothes, shoes and furniture where have a discount to save their money and do less expenses. In conclusion, increasing the number people who are buy things online become inactive, but if the seller attack the purchasers with affordable prizes, they will opt offline shopping.

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 for this situation as well
 as how to alleviate it.

One of the underlying reason for this problem, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 are becoming less active and lazy in their lifestyle. In addition
, they are opting cozy way to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
 things from sitting place without actions. For example
, more INHABITANTS around the world are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceaseddiscontinued
stopped
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 products from markets, otherwise
 they are shopping online regardless of the cost. Thus
, the advent of the internet have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 the way You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
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.

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prevent
. The first
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 on internet too much, besides
 the customers should The modal verb ‘should’ requires the verb’s base form.make
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a
 advertising within affordable costs, not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :economical
cheap
 prizes This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 qualitative products to the society. For instance
, If children educate not to depend on internet in other words
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 phones and computers less, they will do active way about shopping.

The another most effective tackle is shops like supermarket, restaurant, should This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 advertisements and organize This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 kind of attractive competition among the buyers.

For example
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
 food, clothes, shoes and furniture where have a discount to save their money and do Did you mean “fewer”? The noun expenses is countable.fewer
less
 expenses.

In conclusion
, increasing the number You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 who are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 things online become inactive, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 if the seller attack the purchasers with affordable prizes, they will opt offline shopping. 