Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

WRITING TASK 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent you agree or diagree with this statement. You should write at least 250 words.

WRITING TASK 2 Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. 85GdB
Today's world is the world of choices much different from the past. In today's age and the day we have a number of options. In this essay i will examine to how much extent I agree or disagree. I completely agree that in this we have alot of alternatives. Firstly, option are there in every thing starting from minor to large things in every field we have a variety of choices to select for instance, we can eat any thing we want, every country has different specialities, we can wear any thing formal to informal no one can claim us for our this act. Moreover, coming towards our career different universities offer different courses from which one can choose according to his ability and choice. At the moment, people can opt any lifestyle, food, clothing whatever they want while, in past young ones follows the same as their elders hence, time has much changed up til now. As it was the trend in the past that children will follow the same job of their father when they grew up, no one feels bad for this situation because options were not there for them or they were not allowed to share their interests. In conclusion, nowadays people have a range of choices and I agree with that.
Today
's world is the world of choices much
different
from the past. In
today
's age and the day we have a number of options. In this essay
i
will examine to how much extent I
agree
or disagree. I completely
agree
that in this we have
alot
of alternatives.

Firstly
, option are there in every thing starting from minor to large things in every field we have a variety of choices to select
for instance
, we can eat
any thing
we want, every country has
different
specialities, we can wear
any thing
formal to informal no one can claim us for our this act.
Moreover
, coming towards our career
different
universities offer
different
courses from which one can choose according to his ability and choice.

At the moment,
people
can opt any lifestyle, food, clothing whatever they want while, in past young ones follows the same as their elders
hence
, time has much
changed
up til
now
. As it was the trend in the past that children will follow the same job of their father when they grew up, no one feels
bad
for this situation
because
options were not there for
them or
they were not
allowed
to share their interests.

In conclusion
, nowadays
people
have a range of choices and I
agree
with that.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad
Show Comments
Knowledge of languages is the doorway to wisdom.
Roger Bacon

IELTS essay WRITING TASK 2 Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
216 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts