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Writing task 2  More and more students at university today are not choosing to study science. Why is this happening? What are the effects of this?  The tertiary level of education, which is known as university study, gives chance to choose a subject according to their interest. Due to having the availability of a variety of new subject selection, thousands of students neglect the study of science in order to move easy one.

Writing task 2 More and more students at university today are not choosing to study science. Why is this happening? What are the effects of this? The tertiary level of education, which is known as university study, gives chance to choose a subject according to their interest. Due to having the availability of a variety of new subject selection, thousands of students neglect the study of science in order to move easy one. 0d0q
Writing task 2 More and more students at university today are not choosing to study science. Why is this happening? What are the effects of this? The tertiary level of education, which is known as university study, gives chance to choose a subject according to their interest. Due to having the availability of a variety of new subject selection, thousands of students neglect the study of science in order to move easy one. This essay will be discussed the key factors that are responsible behind it along with the effects in upcoming paragraphs. Nevertheless, to say after completing the study at schools, students want to pursue a career in that field which has more demand and this is the main reason to choose other subject over science at university level. Likewise, Millions of students today prefer to do business oriented study in order to get employment as soon as finishing the study. There is no denying the fact today, business sector lure a big package of the salary as well as prestigious status in society. Conversely, there is a few chance of getting a job in the science field and pay scale is far less than compared to business or economics area and this has become the biggest threat to the students; therefore they pay less attention towards it. Secondly, science stream is quite complex and it is difficult to read and understand even though it has a lengthy concept. Here to study biology and chemistry sets good example, this takes countless time to read it however. Additionally, many times it has been observed that a learner spends his precious majority of time in a laboratory to conduct various experiments which some time causes the accident. Take less interest in science undoubtedly, has negative effects. Due to have the knowledge of science, scientist invented enormous things for daily life such as I phone, electricity, various gadgets so on. If fewer students enrolled in science field than in future we do not have more scientists even there is no room for latest discovery. Moreover, today the time of epidemic, namely, covid-19 make the study of science mandatory in account to do research on vaccine that is only possible by study science at university level. To conclude, undoubtedly, corporate, business and economics areas are more popular among students as it is helpful to make bright career while, the weightage of science field is not less than any other subjects. so, and pupils should give top priority to study science at university level and prove to make it wise decision to set further example.
Writing task 2

More and more
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students
at
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university
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today
are not choosing to
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study
science.

Why is this happening?

What are the effects of this?

The tertiary level of education, which
is known
as
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university
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study
, gives chance to choose a
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subject
according to their interest. Due to having the availability of a variety of new
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subject
selection, thousands of
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students
neglect the
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study
of
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science
in order to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
move
easy one. This essay will
be discussed
the key factors that are responsible behind it along with the effects in upcoming paragraphs.

Nevertheless
, to say after completing the
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study
at schools,
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students
want to pursue a career in that
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field
which has more demand and this is the main reason to choose other
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subject
over
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science
at
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university
level.
Likewise
, Millions of
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students
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today
prefer to do
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business
oriented
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study
in order to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
employment as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
as finishing the
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study
. There is no denying the fact
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today
,
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business
sector lure a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
big
package of the salary
as well
as prestigious status in society.

Conversely
, there is a
Possible agreement error. The noun chance seems to be countable; consider using: "few chances".
few chance
of getting a job in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
science
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field
and pay scale is far
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less
than compared to
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business
or economics area and this has become the biggest threat to the
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students
;
therefore
they pay
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less
attention towards it.
Secondly
,
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science
stream is quite complex and it is difficult to read and understand
even though
it has a lengthy concept. Here to
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study
biology and chemistry sets
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
example, this takes countless
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time
to read it
however
.
Additionally
,
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many
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times
it has
been observed
that a learner spends his precious majority of
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time
in a laboratory to conduct various experiments which
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
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time
causes the accident.

Take
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less
interest in
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science
undoubtedly
, has
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negative
effects. Due to have the knowledge of
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science
, scientist invented enormous things for daily life such as I phone, electricity, various gadgets
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so
on. If fewer
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students
enrolled in
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science
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field
than in future we do not have more scientists even there is no room for latest discovery.
Moreover
,
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today
the
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time
of epidemic,
namely
,
Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?
covid-19
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make
the
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study
of
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science
mandatory in account to do research on vaccine
that is
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only
possible by
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study
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
science
at
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
university
level.

To conclude
,
undoubtedly
, corporate,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
business
and economics areas are more popular among
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
as it is helpful to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
bright career while, the weightage of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
science
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
field
is not
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less
than any other
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subjects
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
so
, and pupils should give top priority to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
study
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
science
at
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
university
level and prove to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
it wise decision to set
further
example.
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IELTS essay Writing task 2 More and more students at university today are not choosing to study science. Why is this happening? What are the effects of this? The tertiary level of education, which is known as university study, gives chance to choose a subject according to their interest. Due to having the availability of a variety of new subject selection, thousands of students neglect the study of science in order to move easy one.

Essay
  American English
9 paragraphs
431 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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