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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different culture and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree this opinion.

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Music has always been a key distinguisher of culture but many believe that it can also bridge cultural gaps and differences in age. Though I think some people overstate the impact of music leveling the differences between generations, I strongly believe that it brings people of different cultures together by expressing universal sentiments. The main reason that I believe music is not a particularly good unifier in terms of generational disparity is that people tend to enjoy the music from their formative years and disdain whatever is currently relevant. Though there are of course exceptions, most people would recognise the mostly accurate stereotype of an old person complaining about the music that youths listen to nowadays. For example, in America some of the most popular artists today include Kanye West, Taylor Swift, and Rihanna. These artists differ greatly from past musicians. Kanye is a brash rapper with controversial opinions whose music constantly shifts and redefines genre. Taylor Swift and Rihanna write sugary pop songs that become ubiquitous in cafes and on the radio. Older people prefer what they used to listen to, whether that be intricate melodies and insightful writing of The Beatles or the raw sincerity of old school rap. The differences between the generations are reflected and augmented rather than mediated due to the different personalities and styles of modern music. Although music does little to alleviate generational barriers, it does help cultures relate through universal, human perspectives. What I mean by this is that even though people may not understand another culture they can still understand the messages of the music. One great example of this is the music of Bob Marley. Bob Marley is from a small Carribbean country called Jamaica, a country whose culture has become influential around the world. This is because he expressed universal feelings of love, empathy, and positivity against the backdrop of a nation experiencing political and economic upheaval. His resilience against this pulses through his infectious music and has translated across cultural divides. An Asian person, who might not have any firsthand experience with different races or cultures, can still identify with Bob Marley and enjoy his music. This connection based entirely on music brings together people of disparate cultures through an emotional and intellectual bonding on common issues. In conclusion, although music may actually do more to divide the young and old it definitely uses its universality to bring together different cultures. It is especially important at a time when the world appears to be more divided than ever that we find common ground to build cross-cultural relationships upon.
Music
has always been a key
distinguisher
of
culture
but
many
believe that it can
also
bridge cultural gaps and differences in age. Though I
think
some
people
overstate the impact of
music
leveling the differences between generations, I
strongly
believe that it brings
people
of
different
cultures
together by expressing universal sentiments.

The main reason that I believe
music
is not a
particularly
good
unifier in terms of generational disparity is that
people
tend to enjoy the
music
from their formative years and disdain whatever is
currently
relevant. Though there are
of course
exceptions, most
people
would
recognise
the
mostly
accurate stereotype of an
old
person complaining about the
music
that youths listen to nowadays.
For example
, in America
some
of the most popular artists
today
include Kanye West, Taylor Swift, and Rihanna. These artists differ
greatly
from past musicians. Kanye is a brash rapper with controversial opinions whose
music
constantly
shifts and redefines genre. Taylor Swift and Rihanna write sugary pop songs that become ubiquitous in
cafes
and on the radio. Older
people
prefer what they
used
to listen to, whether that be intricate melodies and insightful writing of The Beatles or the raw sincerity of
old
school rap. The differences between the generations
are reflected
and augmented
rather
than mediated due to the
different
personalities and styles of modern music.

Although
music
does
little
to alleviate generational barriers, it does
help
cultures
relate through universal, human perspectives. What I mean by this is that
even though
people
may not understand another
culture
they can
still
understand the messages of the
music
. One great example of this is the
music
of Bob Marley. Bob Marley is from a
small
Carribbean
country called Jamaica, a country whose
culture
has become influential around the world. This is
because
he expressed universal feelings of
love
, empathy, and positivity against the backdrop of a nation experiencing political and economic upheaval. His resilience against
this
pulses through his infectious
music
and has translated across cultural divides. An Asian person, who might not have any firsthand experience with
different
races or
cultures
, can
still
identify with Bob Marley and enjoy his
music
. This connection based
entirely
on
music
brings together
people
of disparate
cultures
through an emotional and intellectual bonding on common issues.

In conclusion
, although
music
may actually do more to divide the young and
old
it definitely
uses
its universality to bring together
different
cultures
. It is
especially
important
at a time when the world appears to be more divided than ever that we find common ground to build cross-cultural relationships upon.
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IELTS essay Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different culture and ages together. this opinion.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
430 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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