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Writing task 2 an essay Internet contains a lot of information however sometimes this information is inaccurate or wrong Do you agree or disagree with this statement v.2

Writing task 2 an essay Internet contains a lot of information however sometimes this information is inaccurate or wrong v. 2
In today’s world, technology has changed human lives significantly. Many technological devices and systems have been invented in the last decade. The internet is one prevalent system that has improved our lives. Getting information through the internet is a very convenient way for updated news. However, some people say that the internet sometimes contains a lot of inaccurate information which is not a good source for getting information. The accuracy of information on the internet will be discussed carefully. On the one hand, some people who assert that online information is not correct at all support that some documentaries are released by unreliable group of people or organizations, which contain wrong information. The media these days is very easy to access by everyone. People are able to share or send some information widespread through the internet. The misinterpretation and misinformation can easily happen. For example, some people mislead to present an interesting title of news which sometimes change meanings in different ways and make people to be more confused. The purpose of this intention is attraction many readers and advertisements. As a result, with the information from the internet, readers need to pay attention closely to contents and evaluate which is accurate or misinformation before belief. On the other hand, some people argue that most of information on the internet is also accurate. This is because there are many good websites that are produced by reliable organizations. All news and information that comes from those websites always attaches with references that readers can search or check the content of information. Some documentary online are always base on the published information such as news or magazines. For instance, BBC news or The Reader’s Digest which are the popular news and magazine resources in the world, these contains all precise information which is already proved by scientists and edit by veterans. Therefore, a lot of information on some websites is more reliable and accurate for updating information. To sum up with my opinion, both sides have pro and cons which is very hard to decide which side is over. However, I would like to disagree with this statement for a couple reasons. From my perspective, readers cannot be gullible or blamed that all the information on the internet is incorrect but they should be more aware that they have to consider carefully before totally belief any information.
In
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today
’s world, technology has
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changed
human
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lives
significantly
.
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Many
technological devices and systems have
been invented
in the last decade. The internet is one prevalent system that has
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improved
our
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lives
. Getting
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information
through the internet is a
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very
convenient way for updated
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news
.
However
,
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some
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people
say that the internet
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sometimes
contains
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a lot of
inaccurate
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information
which is not a
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good
source for getting
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information
. The accuracy of
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information
on the internet will
be discussed
carefully
.

On the one hand,
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some
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people
who assert that online
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information
is not correct at all support that
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some
documentaries
are released
by unreliable group of
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people
or organizations, which contain
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wrong
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information
. The media these days is
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very
easy to access by everyone.
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People
are able to share or
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send
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some
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information
widespread through the internet. The misinterpretation and misinformation can
easily
happen.
For example
,
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some
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people
mislead to present an interesting title of
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news
which
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sometimes
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change
meanings in
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different
ways and
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make
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people
to be more confused. The purpose of this intention is attraction
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many
readers and advertisements.
As a result
, with the
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information
from the internet, readers need to pay attention
closely
to contents and evaluate which is accurate or misinformation
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before
belief.

On the other hand
,
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some
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people
argue that most of
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information
on the internet is
also
accurate. This is
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because
there are
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many
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good
websites that
are produced
by reliable organizations. All
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news
and
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information
that
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comes
from those websites always attaches with references that readers can search or
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check
the content of
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information
.
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Some
documentary online are always base on the published
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information
such as
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news
or magazines.
For instance
, BBC
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news
or The Reader’s Digest which are the popular
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news
and magazine resources in the world,
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these contains
all precise
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information
which is already proved by scientists and edit by veterans.
Therefore
,
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a lot of
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information
on
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some
websites is more reliable and accurate for updating information.

To sum up with my opinion, both sides have pro and cons which is
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very
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hard
to decide which side is over.
However
, I would like to disagree with this statement for a
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couple
reasons. From my perspective, readers cannot be gullible or blamed that all the
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information
on the internet is incorrect
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but
they should be more aware that they
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have to
consider
carefully
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before
totally
belief any
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information
.
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
29Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS essay Writing task 2 an essay Internet contains a lot of information however sometimes this information is inaccurate or wrong v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
395 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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